The un hone bright onto my face, dancing on my eyelid.Within a few econd I opened my eye to a new day o full of promie and hope, jut like the morning unhine. However, the lovely day would have to be a ad one, for I‘d have to leave my home for college.
Turning around, my mother fixed her eye on the phone.Blinking back tear, he forced her attention elewhere. Mum got herelf buy and did all the thing he needed to do. Still,my rare ilence made the houe trangely empty. However, like the fledgling, I had to fly away and find my place in the world.She knew thi in her mind, yet her heart wa till addened.
Time marched on and there wa nothing we could do to top it. Soon we were in the running car, feeling the warm breeze on our face. Maybe it‘ quite a uitable time to how love to each other, but neither of u aid anything.
The un finally dipped below the horizon, and we were in different place. No call from home, though I knew exactly what he wa doing then. She mut have turned away from the phone o a not to ee it, and continued to do the endle houe work a uual.
No choice i perfect in the world. But I will alway be grateful for the pricele gift that day gave me: the widom to know that all our experience in life doe not make u le but more able to love.
简 评
考上大学了，离家的心情相信所有经历过的人都不会忘记。对家庭的依恋，对父母的牵挂，对新生活的向往和对未知世界的忧虑，让人百感交集，又有些不知所措。[由Www.haozuowen.com整理]
这篇优美的散文通过对离家赴校那一天的景物、人物、事件的描写，成功而完整地抒发了自己这种复杂的心情。
文章语言纯正，妙笔生花，字里行间饱含着真情，感人至深。展现在我们面前的是一幅羽翼初长的雏鸟勇敢地朝着自己的理想展翅高飞的画面。总结部分也非常真实而贴切：生命中的各种经历，是让我们学会更好地去爱。看到这里，哪有人不被感动的呢?