A Shining Star
A good teacher i like a hining tar to tudent. Mi Li, my enior high chool Englih teacher, i a hining tar in my life.
When I began my enior high chool year, I had difficulty in learning Englih. I dared not peak Englih aloud in public becaue of my poor pronunciation and intonation. I could not get high mark and my grammar wa not right at all. Frutrated and afraid of being laughed at, I never put up my hand to anwer quetion in Englih cla. When Mi Li found out my ituation, he encouraged me and lent me a hand. She patiently taught me Englih grammar, helped me undertand how to write a good entence,and lent me many Englih book and magazine, which rapidly improved my Englih. With her help, I became intereted in Englih and eventually got high mark.
Mi Li, like a hining tar, hine in my path of ucce.
一颗璀璨的明星
一个好老师对他的学生来说就像一颗闪亮的明星。李老师，我高中时的英语老师，就是我生命中一颗闪亮的新星。
当我开始上高中的时候，我英语学习有困难。因为我可怜的发音和语调我不敢在公开场合开口大声说英语。我拿不到高分，我的语法是不正确的。沮丧和害怕被人嘲笑，我从来没有举手在英语课堂回答提问。李老师发现我的情况后，她鼓励我，帮助我。她耐心地教我英语语法，帮助我了解如何写好句子，还借给我许多英语书和杂志，迅速提高了我的英语。在她的帮助下，我渐渐对英语感兴趣，并最终得到了很高的分数。WWw.hAOZUowEN.com
李老师，就像一颗闪亮的星照耀着我前进的道路。