题目：Academic Dihonety on Campu
写作要求
Recent urvey how that a lot of college tudent download paper from the Internet to avethe trouble of doing the aignment. Thi kind of academic dihonety doe harm to the tudent.
You are required to analyze it harmful effect and ugget ome way to prevent it.
Write on Anwer Sheet Two a compoition of about 200 word on the following topic:
Academic Dihonety on Campu
You are to write in three part.
In the ? rt part, tate peci? cally what your opinion i.
In the econd part, provide reaon to upport your opinion with appropriate detail.
In the lat part, bring what you have written to a natural concluion or a ummary.
Mark will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriatene. Failure tofollow the intruction may reult in a lo of mark.
审题思路
本题是一道现象解释说明/结果预测型的题目，要求分析学术欺骗行为可能会有什么样的恶果，并提出预防措施 。可以从以下几方面进行分析 ：
关于结果方面：⑴ 对个人能力 、诚信等方面不利 ；⑵ 对他人不公平，造成恶劣影响 ；可以单说一项 ，也可以综合起来说。
关于建议方面：⑴ 事先说明这种做法的后果，进行教育；⑵ 采取惩罚措施 。WWw.hAOZuowEn.com
范文赏析
Academic Dihonety on Campu
It i hown in the recent urvey that many college tudent copy paper from the Internet to ave the trouble of doing their aignment . In my opinion, thi kind of academic dihonety i very harmful to thee tudent.
引言部分 ：作者先提出有学生从网上抄文章以完成老师布置的任务，然后提出自己的观点：这种行为对学生是不利的。
Firt, copying paper from the Internet make tudent lazy. Copying paper from the Internet eem eay and can ave ome time and trouble; eldom work hard to complete their paper on their own. In other word, tudent will become lazier and lazier. Second, tudent can learn little from copying other’ work. Student cannot improve their abilitie jut by downloading paper from the Internet without their own thinking and working. What’ wore, once tudent get ued to academic cheating, they may alo cheat in other cae in the future, which will be very dangerou for them, epecially when it’ put down in the honety record .
主体部分：作者在这里给出了三个理由：使学生变懒 ；学不到东西，破坏诚信。这里使用 了firt，econd，what wore来连接这些理由。这里的一个亮点是近义词的使用，如 ：copy paper from the Internet ，academic dihonety ，copy other work ，download paper from the internet，academic cheating 等都是表示学术舞弊行为。
Therefore, in order to prevent academic dihonety on campu, ome punihment by the chool may be neceary. But the mot important thing i that teacher hould talk to thoe tudent, and make them aware of the fact that copying other’ work cannot bring them any knowledge and that only by working hard can they improve themelve.
总结部分：作者用therefore自然引入结论部分，提出自己的建议：需要惩罚，但更要教育。
亮点回放
1.ave the trouble of doing th.:“省去做某事的麻烦”；
2.aignment : “任务，被指定的（课外 ）作业” ；此处也可以用homework ，tak等 ，但是aignment学术性更强些，在这里更恰当。
3.download :“下载”；这是常用的与网络相关的词语 ，常用 的还有upload ，copyand pate ，intall ，unintall等 。
4.inothercae: “在其他情况下” ；也可以用inotherituation ，onotheroccaion，under other circumtance等 。
5. be put down:“记下”；这里还可以用be written down ，be recorded等 。
6.honety record: “诚信记录” ；也可以用integrity record来代替 。
7. talk to: 通常表示“和某人谈话” ，此处暗含着“教育某人”的意思 。
8.only by working hard can they improve themelve: “只有通过努力他们才能有所提高” 这里使用 的是部分倒装 的句式 。当only，hardly，carcely，eldom等词放在句首时，通常要部分倒装。