文章开门见山,直接点题.写出作者极度喜欢电视节目的嗜好,接着说明其原因,条理清晰,语言流畅
I like watching TV very much. I uually pend much time watching TV every day . There are everal reaon why I like watching TV. There are many intereting and lively programme on TV with ound and image. I can chooe the prpgramme I like. Watching TV can bring me happine and I can learn a lot about the world at the ame time and o on.
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I like watching TV very much. I uually pend much time watching TV every day . There are everal reaon why I like watching TV. There are many intereting and lively programme on TV with ound and image. I can chooe the prpgramme I like.
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本文围绕我喜欢看电视展开描写，对看电视的时间，喜欢看电视的原因，喜欢的电视节目一一进行了描述。用词恰当，内容完整。