My dad
My dad i my firt teacher and my important friend. I often ued to it on my dad knee and litening to him the torie when I wa a younger. He give me the dream about a little girl and he told to me try me bet to help people who are in the trouble by tolding thee torie. But my dad in’t o kind every moment. Sometime I aw a clamate with the matter didn’t go to Kindergarten when I wa in Kindergerten. I felt that i really good. So I cheated with my dad and I enjoyed myelf outdoor. Later, my dad learned about that, he wa angry with me, he pulled me to my bedroom and fine me tand facing the iter’ dek for everal hour. I know that my dad hoped me will get good grade, o he wa angry when he knew that I cut cla to play. Since then, I no longer cutting cla, and even I have been early to go to chool, becaue I don’t want to make my dad diappointed. In my growing, my dad i alway accompanied me, taught me a lot of thing, I wa very grateful to him. I want to ay to my dad “I love you, my dad!”
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I often ued to it on my dad knee and litening to him the torie when I wa a younger.
...and he told to me try me bet to help people who are in the trouble by tolding thee torie.
Sometime I aw a clamate with the matter didn’t go to Kindergarten when I wa in Kindergerten. 不知道想要表达什么意思？且有拼写错误[由www.haoZuowen.Com整理]
I know that my dad hoped me will get good grade, o he wa angry when he knew that I cut cla to play.
I no longer cutting cla
...fine me tand facing the iter’ dek for everal hour.
my dad i alway accompanied me, taught me a lot of thing,
作者从生活的小事说起，表达对父亲的感激之情，很真挚，很感人。