I love my chool
My chool i very big with everal tall building.there are about 800 tudent in it .We have a big playground with a lot tree around it.In ummer ,there are all kind of flower everywhere. We have a lot of fun at chool. During the break,we play game and do port,uch a playing baketball, football and table tenni. All of u tudent can tudy hard, obey the chool rule ,take care of the chool environment. There are many intereting activitie for u to take part in. The teacher in the chool are kind to u jut like our parent.In my heart, the chool i like a big family. I like my chool and feel proud of it.
1.文章书写形式不规范，希望注意。
2.“there are …”句首字母要大写。应改为.“There are …”.
3.My chool i very big with everal tall building.“with”用得恰到好处。
4.There are many intereting activitie for u to take part in. 运用了不定式作后置定语，很好。
5.In my heart, the chool i like a big family. 比喻恰当。
文章语句连贯、流畅，句意完整，能利用较复杂的句式结构表达思想，基本功扎实、雄厚。不足之处在今后学习中要注意标点符号及字母大小写等细微问题。
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