英语命题作文：父亲节就要到了，请写一篇以我的父亲为题的英语作文。
My FatherThere i alway a brilliant image living in my heart. That i my dear father. Seen through the eye of many other people, father eem to be a very ordinary peron. But he i quite extraordinary in my eye, I have never lot my wonder at hi good-peronalitie uch a diligence, devotion, care, optimim ever ince my childhood.
Being a farmer, father work very hard in the field all the year round. He work from dawn till duk every day and even till midnight when it i the harvet eaon. He eldom enjoy leiure with other farmer even if the farm work i not much. He chooe to live a buy life with reluctance to top for a while.Father devote all himelf to our family.
A we are poor, he alway trie hi bet to upport our family and afford the tuition for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never top working laboriouly in the field throughout the year. Now he ha got a wrinkled face and white hair becaue of exceive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other peron of hi age. In pite of all thi, father never complain to u. It i hi full devotion that we're living a better life now. It i hi full devotion that both my brother and I are able to tudy at college.Father how much care to u children and my mother a well. Whenever there i any deliciou food on the table, he jut leave it to u while he take the imple one himelf. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not heitate a moment to get ome medicine for u or take u to ee the doctor.WWw.hAOZUowEN.com
My mother uffer a bad dieae. Father look after her very carefully. He never let mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciate him m much that he often praie him a a model huband before other.Father i a peron full of optimim. He never complain about our poor life. He i never frutrated by trouble. He often tell u that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to hi optimim, we are all confident to face our life and work.We all think that father i not in the leat an ordinary man. He play an extraordinary role in my family. We can't have anything without him. Now I'm puruing further tudie at college far away from father. I mi him very much. And I often ee him in my dream. Hi great image i deeply carved in my mind.
评语：本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。