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童年是美好的，人人都会有难忘的回忆。请按下面的要点记述发生在童年的一件事：
①我18岁了，但是童年的乐趣像甜蜜的梦一样令人难忘。②一天，我们全家去爬山。父亲让我和姐姐来一场比赛。谁先爬到山顶就会得到一件玩具。③开始我领先，几分钟之后姐姐到了我的前面；我不甘落后，最终第一个到达山顶。④我们在山顶欣赏美景，吃野餐。之后，我们快活地下山了。我最高兴，因为我得到了一件玩具。
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a pleaant memory of my childhood
i am eighteen year old now, but the recollection① of the fun and amuement② i like a weet dream.one unday, our family went to climb the beautiful huhan hill .my father told my elder iter and me that the firt one to get to the top would be given a toy. we jumped with joy. we tarted to run up. at firt i took the lead. a few minute later i wa breathle and my iter wa ahead of me. the oft mae of the waving gra, and the drowy③, balmy④ air all ent their warm invitation for me to ret. but i followed my thirt for the toy and continued climbing. at lat i reached the top firt.
there we enjoyed the facinating view and had a picnic. at about two o＇clock we danced our way down the hill with joy in our heart, and i felt happier than the other becaue i got a toytrain .[由wWw.HaozuoWen.com整理]
词语解释①recollection [rek+＇lekm+n] n．回忆；追忆②amuement[+＇mju:zm+nt] n．乐趣；娱乐活动③drowy[＇drauzi] a．昏昏欲睡的；催人入睡的④balmy[＇ba:mi] a．有香气的；芬芳的
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1）本文记叙了作者儿时的一件小事。事情虽小，却令作者回味无穷，每每忆起总有一种甜美的（pleaant）感受，好像做着香甜的梦（weet dream）。这样叙述会给读者留下深刻的印象。由此看来，写记叙文不要面面俱到，要从众多素材中撷取一件最有代表性的事例叙述即可。2）作者在文中使用了三种修辞格：（1）拟人（peronification）：“the oft mae of waving gra，and the drowy，balmy air all ent their invitation for me to ret．”（那起伏的嫩软青草，那催人入睡的芬芳的气息都在热烈邀请我停下来休息。）；（2）明喻（imile）：“like a weet dream”（像做着香甜的梦）；（3）隐喻（metaphor）：“followed my thirt for the toy”（渴望得到那件玩具）。这样，全文读来饶有风趣。