GRE作文点评:高分作文分析
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GRE作文点评:高分作文分析

时间:2014-09-20 10:46:16 | 编辑:王晓坤

Gre写作是美国所有考试质量要求最高的一类作文考试,而改革后的新版gre作文考试更客观的考察考生的逻辑思维能力,我们又如何分析gre写作中的论点,并且清晰的表达自己的逻辑评价和思维能力呢?下面是有关gre高分作文的点评:

Iue 15 Unfortunately, the media tend to highlight what i enational at the moment. Society would be better erved if the media reported or focued more fully on event and trend that will ultimately have the mot long- term ignificance.

The peaker aert that rather than merely highlighting certain enational event the media hould provide complete coverage of more important event. While the peaker aertion ha merit from a normative tandpoint, in the final analyi I find thi aertion indefenible.

个人认为这一段最后一句可以背掉放入自己建立的句子库内。

Upon firt impreion the peaker claim eem quite compelling, for two reaon. Firt, without the benefit of a complete, unfiltered, and balanced account of current event, it i impoible to develop an informed and intelligent opinion about important ocial and political iue and, in turn, to contribute meaningfully to our democratic ociety, which relie on broad participation in an ongoing debate about uch iue to teer a proper coure. The end reult of our being a largely uninformed people i that we relegate the mot important deciion to a handful of legilator, jurit, and executive who may or may not know what i bet for u. Second, by focuing on the enationalby which I take the peaker to mean comparatively hocking, entertaining, and titillating event which eaily catch one attention-the media appeal to our emotion and baer intinct, rather than to our intellect and reaon. Any obervant peron could lit many example aptly illutrating the trend in thi directionfrom trahy talk how and local new broadcat to The National Enquixer and People Magazine. Thi trend dearly erve to undermine a ociety collective enibilitie and render a ociety member more vulnerable to demagoguery; thu we hould all abhor and reit the trend.WWw.hAOZUowEn.com