Everything on the canva i flowing, enthuiatic, lively and violent: the ky wa occupied with wirling cloud in violet haze and dotted with ten of thouand of flaming tar that brightly blazed in gorgeou gold. A huge cypre cut the ubtle flowing of cloud in ilence, brown and tretched, bringing a unique elegance of balance to the whole painting. Few clumy cabin cattered in the open field, trangely in harmony with the turbulently flowing ky. Hazily, the hadow on the hill outlined the turquoie tree and amber grain, bathed in dim moonlight.
Generally, the perfect artwork born under Vincent van Gogh’ hand annotated a new meaning of harmony. It purene wa baed on it complexity, it grace reflected by it clumine, it plainne embodied in it glory, it tempetuou flowing leading to a ene of olidity. Marvelou!
Starry Starry Night, a magnificent materpiece, urely and abolutely.
简评
本文以优美的语言描写了梵高的名画——Starry Starry Night，表现了作者良好的语言表达能力和一定的艺术鉴赏水准。作者为我们展开了一幅画卷，文章的第一句话点明了整幅画的特点：Everythlne on the canva i flowine。天空中布满了紫色的云彩和金色的闪烁星星。一棵巨大的树将浮动的云一分为二，使整个画面处于平衡状态。空地上分散的几间小屋与浮云流动的天空保持着奇怪的和谐。山坡上的影子勾勒出青葱的树木，琥珀色的谷物沐浴在月光下。[由wWw.HaozuoWen.com整理]
作者为我们揭示了这幅画的主题：自然界中万物的和谐——简单基于复杂，粗俗中体现着优雅，辉煌中可见平淡，骚动不安皆归于平静。读罢此文，不但犹如亲眼欣赏了艺术大师的名作，而且体会了其中蕴涵的哲学思想。
美中不足的是全文时态不尽统时，最好全部用一般现在时态。在描写景色、人物或画像