Lonely life for old people 老年人孤独生活
Direction: For thi part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a hort eay. You hould tart your eay with a brief decription of the picture and then expre your view on the lonely life of aged people. You hould write at leat 120 word but no more than 180 word.
Given i a imple but thought-provoking cartoon: an aged grandma it in front of mirror, looking at “herelf” in the mirror and aying to herelf, “I feel rather lonely when my on goe to work and my grandon tudie in chool.”
首句功能为：引出图画；之后为图画内容描述，主要是四要素：人/物、动作、文字和环境，写出四要素中的两三点即可。
Obviouly, thi cartoon can be naturally aociated with the ignificance of children’ accompany for aged parent: if elderly people intend to enjoy happine, it i adviable for their children to pend more time in parent. In contemporary ociety, it ha become a trend for young people to be buy with their work and tudy. Meanwhile, an increaing number of youngter find it difficult to have pare time to accompany lonely parent. However, it i adult children' accompany that enable aged parent to build up adequate hope, love and enthuiam for life. A a matter of fact, young people in large number have not come to realize the loneline of aged people.[由wWw.HaozuoWen.com整理]
二段首句：图画联系主题；之后if句为图画简单评论；in contemporary ociety一句为图画所暗含的社会现象；meanwhile一句为相关人+具体感受；however之后为强调句式，论述意义；尾句是万能总结。
A a youngter, I am convinced that it i of great neceity for u to accompany aged parent, no matter how buy we are. Accordingly, we hould educate, advocate and encourage our friend, clamate and acquaintance to love, repect and care all elderly people. (196 word)
尾段首句：观点；二句建议；尾句展望未来。
显然，这幅漫画可以与儿童相关的意义自然陪年迈的父母：如果老年人要享受幸福，为自己的孩子在父母花更多的时间是明智的。在当代社会，它已成为年轻人忙于工作和学习的一种趋势。同时，越来越多的年轻人发现很难有时间陪伴孤独的父母。然而，它是成年子女的陪伴，让年迈的父母能够建立起足够的希望，爱和对生活的热情。事实上，大量的年轻人没有认识到老年人的孤独。
作为一个年轻人，我相信这是对我们非常必要陪年迈的父母，不管我们有多忙。因此，我们应该教育，提倡和鼓励我们的朋友，同学和朋友的爱，尊重和关爱老年人。