一、英语作文的等级
四档文：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地表达思想。可得0-2分
三档文：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6 处语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得3-5分
二档文：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得6-8分
一档文：内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分，层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有1-2处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。可得9-10分
二、英语作文修改案例
案例一：
a trip to the zoo
原稿：
yeterday way unday and it wa a fine day.o i take a trip to the zoo. i went there by bu, i get there at 8:00 am.there are many people.and ome people watched the tiger ,ome watched the monkey, other watched the bid,i aw many animal and i tool many phto. that’ a intereting trip. i’ll never forget it. that’ my trip.
修改后：
it wa a unny unday after a quick breakfat , i couldn’t wait to get on the bu. thi i my firt time to enjoy a trip alone. varion lovebal animal are waiting in the zoo!WWw.hAOzuowEn.com
a oon a i got there, i wa attracted at once. monkey were climbing in the tree happily. ometime they even came to fetch the banana in viitor’hand. how naughty they were! what’ more, i wa alo interted in the tiger. they are called “the king of animal”,but at thi moment they were lying quetly ,maybe they were leepy. animal ,humanbeing ,we live in a world .we are family . i t came to my mind immiediatly.
anyway, i had an intereting trip today . it gave me a deep impreion, i’ll never forget it.
案例二：
my favourite eaon
原稿：
there are four eaon in a year. and my favourite eaon i ummer. although it’ very hot. i till love it .becaue i can wim in the ea .and lie in un . that’ very comfortable.and i alo can eat ome icecream.they are deliciou o there’re lot of thingd to do in ummer. that’ very interting. o i love ummer. that’ my favourite eaon.
修改后
my favourite eaon
a i all know , there are four eaon. peaking of my favourite , ummer come firt although it i hot.
many thing can be done in ummer uch a wimming in the ea, lying on the b
each … how comfortable ! more importantly i can eat deliciou icecream . of coure, we alo enjoy beautiful view outide. and i’m alway looking forward to going fihing with my father .
in a word ,ummer i my favourite eaon becaue it bring me a lot of happine .
三、英语作文修改的注意事项
1、整篇文章逻辑的修改.作文的目的是为了表达东西,所以首先要确保作文表达的内容是清楚并且符合逻辑的,如果段落之间都是矛盾的就说不过去了.
2、语法的修改篇章与段落的修改过后看句子的结构,说仔细了就是语法的修改.
3、还有就是单词拼写等小细节的修改了.