两支笛子高中英语作文
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两支笛子高中英语作文

时间:2017-04-02 12:25:07 | 编辑:王晓坤

【内容提示】

假如你有某种爱好,想报考某一专业,比如音乐专业、美术专业、体育专业等。而这种爱好又不符合你父母的心愿。平时,他们怕影响你的学习,就把你爱好的东西藏起来或损坏了。你对他们很有意见,不想理他们。但过了一段时间,他们又给你把东西拿出来了或又给你买了更好的你爱好的东西,你反而觉得有些歉疚。请你就此写一篇文章。

【作文示范】

My Two Flute

I have two flute①. One i complete and good; the other broken.Every time I ee them, I can't help feeling orry and thinking of my dear father.

I like playing the flute very much. Although I'm buy with my tudie, I try hard to find time to play it. And I believe I play it quite well. At the lat New Year party I played for my cla, and everyone praied my performance. I made up my mind to become an excellent flute player, o I told my father that I wanted to enter Taihan Muic and Dance College to learn playing the flute, but he wouldn't agree.

In the lat final examination I got poor mark and my father wa angry. Not only did he hit me, but he alo broke my flute. He told me not to play the flute any more.

A few day later I noticed my father wa no longer angry with me. He eemed to feel orry for what he had done. Several time he wanted to have a talk with me, but I walked away, becaue I had not forgiven him.[由www.hAozuowEn.com整理]

The other day a clamate of mine told me that my father had come to the chool to ee me. A I wa till angry with him and did not wih to ee him. I aked the clamate to tell him that I wa not in the claroom. A moment later my clamate returned with a beautiful flute in hi hand and a mile on hi face. “How kind and coniderate② your father i!” he aid in an enviou③ tone.

“Ah, my dear father!”I aid to myelf, while tear began running down my face.

(选自《英语画刊》高中版1997年第4期)

【词语解释】

①flute [flu:t] n.长笛;竹笛

②coniderate [k+n'id+rit] a.考虑周到的;体贴的

③enviou ['envi+] a.妒忌的;羡慕的

【写法指要】

本文写父子各自都怀有的内疚心情:父亲把儿子的笛子弄坏了,觉得对不起儿子;儿子生父亲的气,不理父亲,觉得内疚。

文章第一段就把作者负疚的心理表达出来了,然后写事情的来龙去脉。第二段写作者的爱好和抱负;第三段写考试的失败和父亲的不满;第四段写父亲的内疚和作者的抵触情绪;第五段写父亲给儿子赔不是,儿子不理;第六段写作者负疚的心理。从第二段到第五段每段都写有矛盾冲突,这是这类文章的特点。最后一段作者没有向同学表白什么,只是流泪。但是一切均在不言中。这种写法耐人寻味。