战鼓已经敲响了,各位奋斗在抗击CET最前线的点点英语的朋友们,你们辛苦啦,希望下面的内容能够帮上大家!
四六级考试越来越使模板无用武之地,阅卷老师在阅卷的过程中最多的是关注同学们的用词和句型的使用,四六级作文决胜在于创造闪光点。
高分作文标志
1:四级120-150字;六级150—180字;
2、是否长短句交叉;
3、用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:
1.适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we hould pay attention to而用Attention hould be paid to. )举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:It i ,therefore, high time that ome applicable approache were implemented by the ervice indutry like that. Thu, it competitive edge will be harpened effectively.
2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号,大学英语《四六级作文决胜在于创造闪光点》。[由Www.haozuowen.com整理]
比如说: Other individual, however, take the attitude that …
3. 一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,
people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper, approache代替way, implement代替carry out, harpen one’ competitive edge代替enhance one’ competitivene(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇一位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I By Simmy
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exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
th. exert a tremendou facination on b 替换 b. be intereted in th.
google 替换 earch
an army of 替换 a lot of
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