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英语作文亮点

时间:2014-05-27 12:13:17 | 编辑:王晓坤

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat i in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat ituate in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:i in是常见词语,而ituate in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekend, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekend, we have endle homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endle。endle就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-le变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnihed.

在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnihed,这比good语气强,也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。WWw.hAOZUowEn.com

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There wa a h2 earthquake in Tanghan in the 1980.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/truck Tanghan in the 1980.

大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/trike这样的词汇,更是难能可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which wa written on Augut 15th thi morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of Augut 15th reached/ got to me thi morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu aved my iter.(一般句式)

B: It wa Ah Fu that aved my iter.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to ee crop and vegetable growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to ee crop and vegetable growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: It' a flat of 25 quare metre. There i a bedroom in the flat. There i a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there i a bed; there i a ofa, a dek and a chair a well.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看:

Opinion are divided on the quetion.

60% of the tudent are againt the idea of entrance fee. They believe a public park hould be free of charge. People need a place where they can ret and enjoy themelve. Charging entrance fee will no doubt keep ome people away. What i more, it will become neceary to build gate and wall, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fee hould be charged becaue you need money to pay garden and other worker, and to buy plant and young tree. They uggeted, however, fee hould be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinion are divided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分),使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They uggeted, however, fee hould be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what i more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fee will no doubt keep ome people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

总之,要想使自己的文章有亮点,吸引读者,在考试中获得高分,就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫,哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点,都是值得肯定的。

一、 解决方法题型

考生要列举出解决问题的多种途径

1. 问题现状 2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent day, we have to face I problem-----A, which i becoming more and more eriou. Firt, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)

Confronted with A, we hould take a erie of effective meaure to cope with the ituation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).

Peronally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Conequently, I'm confident that a bright future i awaiting u becaue --------------(带来的好处).

二、说明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)

1. 说明事物现状 2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法

Nowaday many people prefer A becaue it ha a ignificant role in our daily life. Generally, it advantage can be een a follow. Firt ----------------(A的优点之一). Beide -------------------(A的优点之二).

But every coin ha two ide. The negative apect are alo apparent. One of the important diadvantage i that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matter wore,------------------(A的第二个缺点).

Through the above analyi, I believe that the poitive apect overweigh the negative one. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).

(From the comparion between thee poitive and negative effect of A, we hould take it reaonably and do it according to the circumtance we are in. Only by thi way, ---------------(对前景的预测).)

三、议论文的框架

(1) 不同观点列举型( 选择型 )

There i a widepread concern over the iue that __作文题目_____. But it i well known that the opinion concerning thi hot topic varie from peron to peron. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their view there are 2 factor contributing to thi attitude a follow: in the firt place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the econd place, ___原因二_____. So it goe without aying that ___观点一_____.

People, however, differ in their opinion on thi matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand, ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there i no doubt that ___观点二______.

A far a I am concerned, I firmly upport the view that __观点一或二______. It i not only becaue ________, but alo becaue _________. The more _______, the more ________.

(2)利弊型的议论文

Nowaday, there i a widepread concern over (the iue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantage and diadvantage in __题目议题_____. Generally peaking, it i widely believed there are everal poitive apect a follow. Firtly, ___优点一______. And econdly ___优点二_____.

Jut A a popular aying goe, "every coin ha two ide", __讨论议题______ i no exception, and in another word, it till ha negative apect. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.

To um up, we hould try to bring the advantage of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the diadvantage to the minimum at the ame time. In that cae, we will definitely make a better ue of the ____讨论议题___.

议论文模板

1.正反观点式议论文模板:

导入:第1段:Recently we've had a dicuion about whether we hould... (导入话题) Our opinion are divided on thi topic.(观点有分歧)

正文:第2段:Mot of the tudent are in favour of it.(正方观点)

Here are the reaon. Firt... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)

第3段:However, the other are h2ly againt it. (反方观点)

Their reaon are a follow. In the firt place... What' more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)

2."A或者B"类议论文模板:

导入:第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A i uperior to B in many way. Other, however, argue that B i much better. Peronally, I would prefer A becaue I think A ha more advantage.

正文:第2段:There are many reaon why I prefer A. The main reaon i that ... Another reaon i that...(赞同A的原因)

第3段: Of coure, B alo ha advantage to ome extent... (列出1~2个B的优势)

结论:第4段: But if all thee factor are conidered, A i much better than B. From what ha been dicued above, we may finally draw the concluion that ...(得出结论)

3.观点论述类议论文模板:

导入:第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题

A a tudent, I am h2ly in favour of the deciion. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对)

The reaon for thi may be lited a follow. (过渡句,承上启下)

正文:第2段:Firt of all... Secondly... Beide...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)

结论:第3段:In concluion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总-分-总"结构)

4."How to"类议论文模板:

导入:第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题

正文:第2段:Many way can help to olve thi eriou problem, but the following may be mot effective. Firt of all... Another way to olve the problem i ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)

结论:第3段:Thee are not the bet but the only two/ three meaure we can take. But it hould be noted that we hould take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)