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1,简单交待时间,地点和结果…
In 1, a brief introduction of the time, place and reult ...
语言简练,规范,开篇吸引人.
Concie language, norm, begin to attract people.
…以…开头,较有新意.前因后果娓娓道来.
... In order to ... Firt, a new, Weiweidaolai antecedent and conequence.
开篇简明扼要,精炼有序;重点描述…给人留下深刻印象.
The opening be concie and to the point, refining orderly; key decription ... Very impreive.
以景喻情,开头颇有新意;倒叙开头,渲染意境.
To view the metaphor, beginning quite new; flahback beginning, rendering the mood.
开头直奔主题,也是一种写法.
At the beginning of traight to the ubject, i alo a kind of way.
开头很活泼.拟人化手法的运用使开头显得活泼,
Beginning very lively. Peronification make beginning i lively,
反问句开头,吸引读者.
Aked at the beginning of a entence, to attract reader.
开头直奔主题,让人一目了然.
At the beginning of traight to the ubject, let people tick out a mile.
开头点题,用词很吸引人.
At the beginning of the theme, with the word i very attractive.[由wwW.HaoZuoWen.com整理]
2,场面和气氛描写为文章增色不少;
2, cene and the atmophere for the decription of grace;
…对精彩地方进行简单描述;点面结合
... On the exciting place for a imple decription; Dianmianjiege
简单介绍情况,自然过渡到下一段;
Brief introduction of ituation, natural tranition to the next paragraph;
情境描写调动起悬念;
Situation decription aroue upene;
充分运用语言,动作,心理描写,使事情具体,生动.
Make full ue of the language, action, pychological decription, make omething pecific, vivid.
简要叙述前因,进行铺垫.
Brief decription of antecedent, to pave the way.
这一部分可以加入对话或者一些心理描写.
Thi part can join the converation or ome pychological decription.
将…改成…更合适些,
Will be ... Change into ... Some more appropriate,
自然承上启下,细节描写突出人物品质,令人感动.
Natural bridge, detail of outtanding character, moving.
叙事中夹写景,以已度人,将心比心.
In hi narration clip, Yiyiduren, feel for other.
拟人化语言使文章更显得生动活泼.
Anthropomorphic language make the article more appear to be lively and vivid.
外形描写十分有趣,突出了…的可爱.介绍中融入了自己的思想,有感染力.