Lng lng ag , there wa an ld tin an naed Tn. He wa ugl and he had n hair. Se peple lived in the village called hi ugl Tn r bald Tn, but t f all called hi Tin Tn, becaue he wa unbelieveble hrt, he wa ut 1.4 eter height. Tin Tn lived in Sunn Fret alne. He had a little wden hue which at the end f the fret. Tn ade a living b cutting tree. He had n hbb but napping. Once, he we up after a lng nap. T hi urprie, he wa in hi he! He becae ver all, ut lie an ant!
He didn&rqu;t nw what t d, he fell aleep again. The da i gne, a little girl fund hi in hi little wden hue. She we hi up. &ldqu;Oh, are u living in a he? &rdqu; He gt angr abut wing up b a tranger. &ldqu;N，I a ld Tn. There i ene call e Tin Tn……&rdqu; &ldqu;But u are tin! Nice t eet u, can u be friend? Becaue I dn&rqu;t have an friend at all. And nae i Phebe! &rdqu;
Tn tarted t lie thi girl. He aid, &ldqu;Can u tae e awa, I a hungr. And apparentl , I can&rqu;t leave thi place all b elf.&rdqu; &ldqu;I&rqu;d lve t.&rdqu; And then , Phebe put hi int her pcet , and run awa happil. After a while , Tn aed, &ldqu;Wh did u get t hue? It&rqu; reall far fr the twn.&rdqu; Phebe tpped running , aid, &ldqu;There i a hrrible nter cing t the village. I heard that there i a agic tne in the fret. I thin it ight help.&rdqu; &ldqu;H……I nw where the agic tne i.&rdqu; Tn aid lwl. &ldqu;I a the agic tne.&rdqu;[由www.haoZuowen.Com整理]
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Phebe baced t the village,and beat the nter with the agic tne. All the peple are ver happ. The regarded her a a her, everne tated t ae friend with her. Hwever, it ee that it wn&rqu;t be ea t cheer her up anre. Peple fund that when he wa alne, he alwa ang a ng, &ldqu;There wa a tin an, Wh had n hair, he lived in a he, and iled friendl&rdqu; But there i nbd reeber Tn except Phebe.
（指导老师： 张苑 广东省中山市民众中学）