这个系列来自部落“四六级作文训练营：改词扩句”，本节目适合备考英语四级和英语六级的朋友，以及有志于提高英语写作水平的朋友，旨在帮助大家写英文作文时，用语更加地道和规范。
原句：
In a developing country uch a China, our invetment in culture, education and cience, and epecially elementary education, mut be thought of firtly. It i important for China to catch up with the developed nation in today' urging wave of technological revolution.
改句：
In a developing country uch a China, our invetment in culture, education and cience, and epecially elementary education, mut enjoy top priority. It i crucial for China to catch up with the developed nation in today' urging wave of technological revolution.
【解析】
原句其实也是一个比较好的句子，但是细细观察后，我们依旧可以发现提高之处，“be thought of firtly”是要表示“首先要考虑到”，词汇相对简单，所以我们可以想一个高级点的词组。我想到的是“priority”这个单词，它的意思是“优先权”，常常和“top”搭配在一起。至于动词“enjoy”，在这里解释为“享有”。“important”为常用词，所以我把其换成了 “crucial”。[由wWw.HaozuoWen.com整理]
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However, upon careful thought, I believe that we hould firt conider environmental protection.
答案：
However, upon careful thought, I believe that top priority hould be given to environmental protection.