关于记忆
【内容提示】
记忆（力）与一个人学习的好坏、能力的强弱关系很大。请你写一篇文章，说明记忆（力）的重要性。文章要点如下：
①伟人的记忆力比普通人的记忆力好。
②好的记忆力对于学习外语很有帮助。
③人脑像一架照相机，但又比照相机功能多。
④记忆是我们时刻保存的日记。
【作文示范】
about memory
ome people have very good memory and can eaily learn quite long poem by heart. there are other people who can only remember thing when they have repeated them again and again. the famou englih writer, charle dicken aid that he could walk down any long treet in london and then tell you the name of every hop he had paed. many of the great men of the world have wonderful memorie.
a good memory i a help in learning a foreign language. everybody learn hi own language by remembering what he hear when he wa a mall child, and ome children----like boy and girl who live abroad with their parent----eem to learn two language a eaily a one. in chool it i not o eay to learn a econd language becaue the pupil have o little time for it, and they are very buy with other ubject a well.
a man＇ mind i rather like a camera, but it take photo not only of what we ee but alo what we feel,hear, mell and tate. when we take a real photo with a camera, there i much to do before the photo i finihed and i readyfor u to how to our friend. in the ame way there i much work to be done before we can keep a picture forever in our mind.[由www.hAozuowEn.com整理]
memory i the diary we all carry about u. we keep thing we have eperienced in thi diary.
【词语解释】
charle dicken[＇tm%:lz ＇dik+n]查尔斯·狄更斯，英国作家
【写法指要】
本文说明了记忆（力）与学习、工作、成就的关系。前两段用的是事例说明法，虽然没有用衔接词语“for eample，uch a”等，但却举出了英国作家狄更斯和在海外随父母居住的小孩等例子。后两段用类推法说明了记忆与人脑和日记的关系，作者把记忆比做照相机和日记。