一、写好文章的开头
开头是作文在阅卷老师面前的第一次亮相,它将决定你所写的文章在阅卷老师心中所留下的第一印象。如果第一印象好,就意味着有了良好的开端,也就成功了一半。good beginning i half done,我们该怎样一提起笔就让自己成功一半呢?
(一)“开门见山”式开头
一般来说,文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”,即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
1. 对于叙事类的文章,可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如“a trip to huanghan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是:lat month, my family went to huanghan by train. it took u ten hour to get there. what a long and tiring journey! we were tired but the beautiful cenery excited u.
2. 对于论述性的文章,可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点,接着展开进一步的论述。如“the time and the money(时间和金钱)” 的开头可以是:mot people ay that money i more important than time. but i don’t think o. firt, when money i ued up, you can earn it back, but……
(二)回忆性开头
在描述事件或游记类的文章中,采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇,如never forget (永远无法忘记), remember (记得),unforgettable (难以忘怀的), exciting(令人激动的),urpriing(令人惊讶的), ad (难过的)……如“a trip to huanghan(黄山之旅)”的开头还以这样写:i will never forget my firt trip to huanghan. 或it wa really an unforgettable experience i had.WWw.hAOZUowEN.com
(三)疑问性开头
在叙事类或论述性的文章中,都可采用疑问型开头,这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如“planting tree(种树)”的开头可以是:have you ever planted tree? don’t you think planting tree i ……
再如“traveling abroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是:if you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not conider ingapore?
(四)倒叙式开头
在有的文章,特别是叙事类的文章中,可以采用倒叙的写作手法,先写出事件的结果,再陈述过程。如“catching thieve (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写:i lay in bed in the hopital. i miled at my friend even though my leg hurt. do you want to know what happened to me? let me tell you. it’ a … tory.
关于怎样写英语作文二、写好正文
(一).在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。
①强调句
[原文]my parent praied ah fu warmly. it had aved my little iter bravely.
[修正]my parent praied ah fu warmly. it wa our brave ah fu who had aved my little iter
bravely.
②由what等引导的从句,此处的what相当于中文的“所……”,有很大的概括力,如:
[原文]we had to tand there to catch the offender.
[修正]what we had to do wa (to) tand there, trying to catch the offender.
what china ha achieved in rec
ent year i known through the world.
china i no longer what it ued to be.
③由with或without引导的短语。如:
he at in a chair with a newpaper in the hand.
④分词短语。如:
atified with the reult, he decided to go on with a new experiment.
⑤倒装句。如:
only in thi way can we achieve our goal.
never before have i een uch a wonderful film.
⑥省略句。如:
if o, victory will be our.
you can make ome change wherever neceary.
⑦对比,这是中文中也常用的方法。如:
failure i not a crime, but failure to learn from failure i.
when i play, i feel excited, and after it i feel relaxed.
(二).通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。
[原文]he topped u half an hour ago. he made u catch the next offender.
[修正]he topped u half an hour ago and made u catch the next offender.
[原文]we had a hort ret. then we began to play happily. we ang and danced.
ome told torie. ome played che.
[修正]after a hort ret, we had great fun inging and dancing,telling joke and playing che.
(三).学会使用过渡词。如:
①递进: then(然后), beide(还有), furthermore(而且), moreover(此外)等。
②转折: however(然而), but(但是), on the country(相反), after all(毕竟)等。
③总结: finally(最后), at lat(最后), in brief(总之), in concluion(最后)等。
④强调: indeed(确实), certainly(一定), urely(确定), above all(尤其)等。
⑤对比: in the ame way(同样地), jut a(正如), on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。
(四).注意使用不同长度的句子。
(五).对于“较复杂的词汇”,可以从以下几个方面着手。
①.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。如:
[原文]a new railway i being built in my hometown.
[修正]a new railway i under contruction in my hometown.
②.使用一些很有“洋味”的单词。如:
thank you for haring the time with u.
the way he view the world i very practical.
③.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:
[原文]i like reading while my brother like watching televiion.
[修正]i like reading while my brother enjoy watching televiion.
关于怎样写英语作文三、写好文章的结尾
文章的结尾没有固定的模式,同学们可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。一般情况下,记叙文和说明文经常采用自然结尾的方法;但夹叙夹议和发表观点类的文章则往往有结束语,以使文章首尾呼应,结构完整。文章结尾的形式也因文章类别和开头的风格而灵活多
(一)自然结尾,点明主题
随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。如“helping the policeman(帮助警察)”的结尾可以是:the two children were praied by the police and they felt happy.
再如“the tortoie aand the hare(龟兔赛跑)” 的结尾可以是:when the hare got to the tree, the tortoie had already been there。
(二)首尾呼应,升华主题
在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题,深化主题,起到“画龙点睛”的效果。如“i love my hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是:i love my hometown, and i am proud of it.
(三)反问结尾,引起深思
这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句,但意义却是肯定的,而且具有一定的强调作用,可引起他人的深思。如 “learning englih can give u a lot of pleaure (学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣)” 的结尾可以是:if we learn englih well, we can …don’t you think learning englih i great fun?
(四)表达祝愿,阐述愿望
这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中,表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。如“a letter to the farmer(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是:i hope the farmer’ life will be better and better.
另外,书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语:bet wihe;i wih you a merry chritma and a happy new year;i wih you have a good time等。
