Special Memorie
The univerity opening ceremony the deeply impreing feeling are a much a part of me now a they were a year ago。
A the day to regiter and become a frehman in FDU approached， excitement increaed。 Being a univerity tudent meant I wa finally coming of age。 Soon I would be on my own，XXX my own deciion and doing what I wanted without omeone looking over my houlder。
Depite month of anticipation， nothing could have prepared me for the impact of the actual day。 Among thouand of new comer itting on the broad lawn in front of the famou XiangHui Auditorium， litening to the peeche by the principal and tudent repreentative， I felt myelf conumed by a ruh of both joy and nervoune。 What would college be like? Would the other tudent like me? And what about the work would I be able to keep up? Being a tudent in high chool eemed to offer little aurance of my being able to urvive college， epecially in FDU which i abundant of excellent counterpart。 Panic et in。It had been nice being repected a a enior by the undercla tudent for the pat year;I didn't quite enjoy the idea of being on the bottom rung of the ladder again。 I wa not aured whether I wanted to grow up after all。
A if in a daze， I roe up with my new clamate around to how repect to the chool ong which wa to be performed。 A the olemn muic flowed， I knew that I wa hearing not jut a ong but the foot tep of a brand new life。 Exciting a the propeet of a new life eemed， it wan't quite eay aying goodbye to the old one the familiar face， the familiar routine。 I would eyen mi thoe day when fully engaged in preparing for the college entrance exam though they were o tiring and the long commute between home and chool that took me everal hour each week。 Good or bad， it wa that I knew。[由www.haoZuowen.Com整理]
Thi September， I wa one of the volunteer to welcome the new comer and guide them around the campu。 I found the familiar mixed feeling hown on their face。 I needn't have worried about if I would like FDU， ince my year here ha turned out to be one of the bet year of my life。 Although going back to thoe day i impoible， it' comforting to know I can reviit my pecial memorie any time。
简 评
这是一篇能引起所有大一新生共鸣的心情感言。进入大学学习是每位高中学子的梦想，作者首先描述了考学成功后，大学开学典礼时她激动的心情：“A the day to regiter and become a frehman ln FDU approached， eXcitement increaed．．． Soon I would be On my own，XXX my own deciion and doing what I wanted without omeone looking ove rmy houlder．．．”但当最初的兴奋过去后，取而代之的是对过去生活的缅怀和对未来的惶恐，“Exciting a the propect Of a new life eemed，it wan't quite eay aying goodbye to the old one．．．I felt myelf conumed by a ruh of both Joy and nervoune．What would college be like? Would the other tudent like me?And what about the workwould I be able tO keep up?”
文章的结尾甚为感人，作者自愿去迎接下一届新生，“guide them around the campu”，使他们尽快熟悉大学生活，这样做因为作者能"理解”新生的感受。
(点评教师：张雪波)