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雅思作文提分技巧

时间:2015-09-24 11:23:23 | 编辑:王晓坤

很多同学在写作文时不知道写什么,感觉自己内容已经写的足够多了,也没有语法错误,但是分数就是不高,接下来小编为大家推荐的是雅思作文提分技巧,欢迎阅读。,

雅思作文提分技巧一:避免空洞的单词和词组

1.一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息,完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子:

When all thing are conidered, young adult of today live more atifying live than thoe of their parent, in my opinion.

这句话当中的“when all thing are conidered ”和“ in my opinion “都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为:

Young adult of today live more atifying live than their parent.

2.有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换,例如:

Due to the fact that our grandparent were under an obligation to help their parent, they did not have the option that young people have at thi point in time.

“ due to the fact that ”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子,可以替换,简化为下面的表达方式:

Becaue our grandparent were obligated to help their parent, they did not have the option that young people have now.

雅思作文提分技巧二:避免重复

1.尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复,但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子:[由www.hAozuowEn.com整理]

The farm my grandfather grew up on wa large in ize.

large 对一个 farm 来说就是 ize 方面的 large, 所以 in ize 可以去掉,

改为:The farm my grandfather grew up on wa large.

更简洁的表达方式为:

My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

2.有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换,例如:

My grandfather ha aid over and over again that he had to work on hi parent' farm.

建议这里的over and over again 就可以改为repeatedly ,显得更为简洁:

My grandfather ha aid repeatedly that he had to work on hi parent' farm.

雅思作文提分技巧三:选择最恰当的语法结构

选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为精确和简练。虽然语法的多样性也很重要,但选择最恰当的语法结构仍然是更为重要的考虑因素。以下原则是在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则:

1.一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如: .

The ituation that reulted in my grandfather' not being able to tudy engineering wa that hi father needed help on the farm.

从意思上来分析,上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfather' not being able to tudy ”,而在表达这个概念时,原句用的主语是 ituation ,谓语动词是 wa ,不能强调需要表达的重点概念,

建议可以改为下面这句话:

My grandfather couldn't tudy engineering becaue hi father needed help on the farm.

2.避免频繁使用“there be ”结构,例如下面的句子:

There were 25 cow on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It wa hard work for my grandfather.

可以改为:

My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25cow on the farm every day.

更简洁的句式为:

My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cow daily.

3.把从句改为短语或单词。例如:

Dairy cow were raied on the farm, which wa located100 kilometer from the nearet univerity and wa in an area that wa remote.

简介的表达方式为:

The dairy farm wa located in a remote area, 100 kilometer to the nearet univerity.

4.仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候,才使用被动语态。例如:

In the fall, not only did the cow have to be milked, but alo the hay wa mowed and tacked by my grandfather' family.

本句不够简洁的原因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭 -my grandfather' family ”,而使用了被动语态后,仿佛重心变成了 cow 和 hay 。

下面的表达方式是主动语态,相对来说更简洁一些:

In the fall, my grandfather' family not only milked the cow but alo mowed and tacked the hay.

5.用更为精确的一个动词来代替动词短语,例如下面这句话:

My grandfather didn't have time to tand around doing nothing with hi chool friend.

Stand around doing nothing 其实可以用一个动词来表达,即 loiter :

My grandfather didn't have time to loiter with hi chool friend.

6.有时两句话的信息经过组合完全可以用一句话来简练地表达,例如:

Profit from the farm were not large. Sometime they were too mall to meet the expene of running a farm. They were not ufficient to pay for a univerity degree.

两句话的信息可以合并为下面这句更为简洁的句子:

Profit from the farm were ometime too mall to meet operational expene,let alone pay for a univerity degree.