1 致可爱的上海 To be a lovely Shanghainee
To be a lovely Shanghainee(2003年上海市英语中考题)
审题：该题的重点在于阐述作为一个可爱的上海人，我们关键应怎样做？在2003年的考生作文中，有一部分同学发生了严重的偏题，把描述重点放在形容上海是怎样的一个大都市，因此失分很多。由此看来，审题的准确是非常重要的。
学生作文：Shanghai i developing quickly everyday. Quite a few foreigner come to viit Shanghai. A the hot of Shanghai, we mut be lovely Shanghainee to tell the viitor that Shanghai i an international city. To be a lovely Shanghainee, firt, we hould do our bet to make the city more beautiful to how our enthuiam. Next, we hould be kind and friendly to everyone. We mut do o to make our guet fell our zeal. Finally, we hould tudy and work hard to rie our ability. Shanghai i developing and we hould make progre to follow the epoch.
上海每天都在迅速发展。相当多的外国人来访问上海。作为东道主的上海，我们必须用可爱的上海话告诉游客，上海是一个国际城市。做可爱的上海人，首先，我们应该尽我们最大的努力让城市更美丽的展示我们的热情。接下来，我们应该友好和友好的每个人。我们必须这样做，使我们的客人下降我们的热情。最后，我们应该努力学习，努力提高自己的能力。上海正在发展，我们应该在时代进步。WWw.hAOZuowEn.com
2 Nanjing Phone Being Vandalized 南京电话被恶意破坏
Viitor to Nanjing are alway impreed by it well-preerved hitorical ite, unique cultural atmophere, luh greenery and wide road. A a Nanjing reident, however, there i one thing I feel ahamed about. Quite a number of public phone in booth on the treet of Nanjing have been unfortunately damaged, and mot of uch damage were even done intentionally by ome people who are “good at” vandalim. Some receiver, for example, were cut off or broken carelely. In ome extreme cae, phone booth were imply burned to ahe, apparently on purpoe.
Setting up phone booth add much modern color to thi old city and repreent the improvement of Nanjing’ telecommunication ytem.And mot importantly, thee public facilitie make it poible for people to communicate with each other cheaply and conveniently, which i a great projectthat benefit citizen. Therefore, they hould be kept in good condition and alway ready for ue. Thi i very important, for it reflect the civilization level of a city in the eye of viitor.
I think the department concerned hould execute tricter management over thee facilitie and provide timely cleaning and proper maintenance, meanwhile, the media hould launch a weeping campaign toraie people’ awarene of need to protect and take care of public facilitie.In ome wetern countrie, thoe who poil public phone with intention will be fined heavily and even aume criminal reponibility for uch behavior.Nanjing could learn from thi practice.
到南京的游客总是对保存完好的历史古迹，独一无二的文化氛围，郁郁葱葱的树木和宽阔的道路印象深刻。然而，作为一名南京市民，有一件事我感到很羞愧。南京大街上的很多公用电话亭不幸被损坏，并且大部分这样的损坏都是一些喜欢恶搞的人故意所为。比如，一些接收器被切断或不小心弄坏。更有甚者把电话亭烧成灰烬，这显然是故意的。
设立公用电话亭给这座古老的城市增添了许多现代化色彩，显示了南京电信系统的改善。最重要的是，这些公共设施使人们能够方便快捷的进行沟通，是一项市民受益的伟大工程。因此，这些设施应该保持在良好和随时可以使用的状态。这是很重要的，因为它反映了游客眼中一座城市的文明水平。
我认为有关部门应该对这些设施执行更为严格的管理并提供及时的清理和适当的维护；同时，媒体应该推出一个清扫活动以提高人民需要爱护公共设施的意识。在一些西方国家，蓄意破坏公用电话的人会受到严重的处罚，有的甚至要对这种行为承担刑事责任。南京也可以借鉴这种做法。
3 涌入大城市 Into big citie
Direction: For thi part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a compoition on the topic: City Problem. You hould write at leat 120 word .following the outline given below in Chinee:
1. 越来越多的人涌入大城市，有些问题随之产生
2. 比较明显的问题有……
3.我对这种现象的想法
范文：
City Problem
城市问题
Nowaday,million of migrant worker flock into citie in earch of job and better living.However,with the harp rie in the urban population,many problem arie in the development of citie.
如今，数以百万计的农民工涌入城市寻找工作和生活，但随着城市人口的急剧增加，城市的发展中出现了许多问题。
Firtly,citie become more and more crowded,putting much preure upon tranportation,houing,anitation,education,employment and o on,City ervice and facilitie have been trained to a breaking point.Secondly, a growing number of private car emit a huge amount of carbon dioxide ,leaving the aire mercilely polluted. What i more,the city i alo threatened by an increae in crime.There i not a ingle day paing without the report of omeone being robbed ,kidnapped or even murdered.
首先，城市变得越来越拥挤，把太多的压力在交通，住房，卫生，教育，就业等，城市服务及设施的使用已经到了极限。其次，越来越多的私家车排放大量的二氧化碳，使空气遭到污染。更甚的是，城市的犯罪率也在上升，没有一天会有人被抢劫、绑架甚至被谋杀的报道。
lat but not leat,city-dweller are not only eparated from the nature but alo iolated from each other,even not knowing the name of their next-door neighbor.
最后但并非最不重要的，城市居民不仅分开的性质，但也彼此分离，甚至不知道他们的名字，他们的隔壁邻居。
All thee problem have harmed the attractivene of the city.More and more people may eek to live in the uburb if there in't any improvement.
所有这些问题都损害了城市的吸引力，如果没有任何改善，越来越多的人可能会在郊区居住。