GMAT考试作文部分每年都会涌现出很多高分学子,要知道GMAT作文拿到高分可是不太容易的。因为我们要达到的标准是比较多的,如果一项不达标我们就可能与GMAT作文满分失之交臂。下面是小编带来的详细介绍,告诉大家想拿到满分就必须达到怎样的标准:
1. 字数高达599word, 充分体现了字数为王的判分倾向。
2. 标准的五段制,首段、末端,中间三段,看上去很美。
3. 没有陈词滥调、满篇废话的模板式语言。
只有以上三点离满分还是很远的,之所以SIX,我看更重要的在于,每段各尽其责,既独立又统一,形成了完整的ARGUMENT,pecifically:
下面是一篇官方给出满分的ARGUMENT范文,我们来一起赏析,看看它为何能cored ix .
中间段3
Finally one mut undertand that not all work environment can be made afer. For example, in the cae of coal mining, a company only ha limited way of making the work environment afe. While companie may be able to enure ome afety precaution, they may not be able to provide all the afety meaure neceary. In other word, a mining company ha limited ability to control the air quality within a coal mine and therefore it cannot control the rik of employee getting blacklung. In other word, regardle of the intent of the company, ome job are imply dangerou in nature.[由wWw.HaozuoWen.com整理]
