Direction: For thi part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a hort eay entitled Hand in Hand We Stand. You hould write at leat 120 word following the outline given below in Chinee：
1. 汶川地震是中国遭受的一次大灾难；
2. 一方有难，八方支援，人们纷纷行动起来共同抗震救灾；
3. 我们能做些什么。
①审题及布局。此写作题是一篇提纲式作文。在布局上，按照提纲的要求展开写作即可。第一段指出地震发生的时间、地点和灾情；第二段讲述全国人民对四川的捐助情况；第三段说明自己作为学生能为灾区做些什么。②语言。作为一篇记叙文，语言表达要准确生动，句式要多样，词汇要丰富，这样可以增添文采。
Hand in Hand We Stand
On May 12, 2008, an 8.0-magnitude earthquake truck Sichuan. Thouand of people lot their live and even more people were left homele. But, hand in hand, the Chinee people faced thi diater with compaion and courage.
People acro China offered to make donation energetically. Relief material and fund were continuouly pouring into quake hit area. What’ more, everal recue team and medical profeional, at home and abroad, wa ent to the earthquake tricken area to earch and recue the urvival.
A far a we tudent are concerned, we hould provide our helping hand for the earthquake tricken compatriot. We can donate our pare money to the uffering people who are in urgent need of food and medicine. Blood donation i alo of vital ignificance for thoe injured people. Student who are equipped with profeional kill can volunteer to the earthquake tricken area to recue more live. Beide, our pirit upport and incere prayer can help the broken heart overcome the temporary diater.[由wwW.HaoZuoWen.com整理]
第一段开门见山，指出地震发生的时间和地点。其中，hand in hand “手挽手”、face thi diater with compaion and courage“用热情和勇气面对灾难”属于高分表达，为文章增色不少。
第二段直接说明全国人民对灾区的捐助情况。What餾 more的使用使文章层次分明，结构清晰。make donation“捐赠”、pour into“涌入”这些都是高分表达。
第三段阐述自己作为学生能为灾区做点什么。Beide进一步说明，支持不光包括物质方面，还包括精神方面。A far a one i concerned是表达自己观点时的常用句型；in urgent need of “急切需要”；be equipped with“具备”均为高分表达。