相信很多参加过雅思考试的学员都会认为小作文要比大作文要难写,认为小作文很难写得出彩。根据多年的教学经验,主要原因是他们的句型都过于单一。其实要想让小作文写得好,也并非就是一件很难的事情。今天小编就来教大家一个帮助大家提高折线图表达的技巧。
在介绍技巧之前,请大家对比一下关于描述电视机观众人数变化的一个折线图5.5分的考生例文和6.5分高分范文的节选片段。
5.5分考生例文:
at 6 a.m., the proportion of TV viewer wa much lower than that of radio litener, with only 2%. After that, it increaed with fluctuation and overtook that of radio litener at 12.40, with 15%. Then it continued to acend until it reached a peak at 45% at 8 p.m., when it tarted to drop, before it levelled off between 2 a.m. and 5 a.m.
6.5分高分范文:
At 6 a.m., the percentage of TV viewer wa only 2%. during the next 8 hour, it howed a gradual upward trend and outnumbered the figure of radio litener. Then, it roe continuouly and peaked at 45% at 8p.m.. After there wa a coniderable decline until 2 a.m. in the next morning, it levelled off at 2% in the lat few hour.
对比了两篇文章之后,我们很容易发现考生例文中,整个文章句型基本上都是主谓宾句型,尽管这位学员注意到了词汇的多样性。而高分范文同时具备了句型和词汇的多样性。因此这说明了,如果想获得6分或者以上的写作分数,要注意词汇和句型的丰富性。[由wwW.HaoZuoWen.com整理]
那么我们一共有哪些不同的句型呢?小编一共罗列了以下五种不同的句型,包括:1.the number of TV viewer roe/increaed/acended/grew/ jumped/ climbed/ oared/ hot up/ howed upward trend between...and...2.The number of TV viewer howed an upward trennd bewteen...and...3.there wa a rie/increae/growth in the figure of TV viewer from...to...4.a rie wa een/howed in the number of TV viewer from…to…5.the period between 6 and 9 witneed/experienced/aw a rie in the figure of TV viewer between… and…
我相信这五种句型都是大家所熟知的,而且大家应该都能够正确地组织成完整的句子。所以如果能够加以意识性地运用到我们的折线图的创作中去,就会让整个文章看起来丰富了很多,再结合一下同义词的替换使用,相信一定会给大家的写作分数加分不少。
当然,要想写作拿高分,要注意检查自己文章以确保整篇文章中不存在任何语法错误。一旦存在这些失误,会给考官不好的印象,分数自然就上不去。
