作文第一段:介绍现象(3句,主题句(时间+事件+地点)+支撑句(数据or举例or两者结合)+自然收尾(第三句若没有把握,也可酌情省略)
时间:当前,最近Recently,Preently,Currently,Nowaday
过去,Over/In the pat decade, In the pat(此时的事件里可用ued to do)
事件:好事:受到青睐。XXX ha gained more and more popularity
坏事:引起关注。XXX haaroued more and morepeople' concern
the phenomenon that...haaroued more and morepeople' concern
中性:成为普遍现象XXX habecome a very common phenomenon
地点、人物:在国内大学里 at dometic univeritie and college
在人们的日常生活里in people‘ daily life
在我们的社会里 in our ociety
在青年人中among young people在家长中间among parent
尤其是白领和大学生 epecially white collar and college tudent
数据支撑:根据最新的一个调查According to a latet urvey
根据一个最新的在1000名大学生中所做的调查According to a latet urvey of 1000 college tudent
相关数据显示:Related tatitic how that ...
举例支撑:XXX涵盖了很多方面,从……到……
It cover a lot of apect ranging from ... to ...由好作网www.hAOzuowEn.com整理
其他备用表达:各种各样的,a variety of,a diverity of一系列,a erie of丰富大量的,an abundance of包含很多方面,apect领域field给人们提供了很多方便和娱乐provide a lot of convenience and entertainment for u.…在人们的生活中占据重要的地位play a profoundly important role in people' life
举例:高校排名在当今社会很流行。(2010年作文)
(时间)Recently,(事件)XXX(univerity ranking)have gained more and more popularity(地点)in our ociety,epecially among parent and high chool tudent.
(举例法)Thee rankingcover a variety of apect ranging from teaching facilitie to thejob propect of graduate.
(数据法)According to a latet urvey in 1000 parent, around 80% of them ay they would take related ranking into conideration before they decide which chool their children hould enter.
Google上一篇英语作者的文章开头两句话(现象+数据支撑)
More and more parent are allowing their pre-teen children to join ocial media platformdepite age retriction and danger of being expoed to objectionable content.According to a pollof 1,000 adult conducted by Liberty Mutual' Reponibility Project,around 17 percent of parent claimed that they had no problem with their pre-teen child uing ocial media platform, compared to 8 percent of the parent a year ago.
第二段:分析原因,利弊(6-7句,主题句+观点1 +支撑+观点2 +支撑。也可酌情写三个观点)
1. “某人做某事”是出于以下三个原因。(真题:学生不重视拼写的原因,学生出于不同的原因选择选修课)
学生会考虑以下几个因素,在做某事的时候。(真题:学生选老师时考虑的因素)
我们可以从……当中得到诸多益处。首先,它对我们的学习有积极的影响。可以帮助我们开拓眼界,丰富我们的人生和阅历,为将来的工作打下坚实的基础,让我们的大学生活更加的丰富,精彩。提高了我们的工作效率。其次,我们可以有机会去和别人接触和交流。有助于提高我们的社交能力。
1. People do th for the following three reaon. Firt, Second, Third (Lat but not the leat)
Student would take the following three factor into conideration when they…
We can benefit a lot from … Firt, it ha a poitive influence on our tudy. It help u broaden/widen our horizon, enrich our life and knowledge, lay a olid foundation for our future work, make our college life more colorful and wonderful, help to improve people’ work efficiency. Second, we can have opportunitie / chance to contact and communicate with other and improve our ocial kill.(promote,trengthen,enhance)
2. ****可能会引起一些列的问题。(预测:过度上网可能引起一些列的问题。)
首先,它对我们的健康有极其不好的影响(威胁到我们的健康)。其次,它影响我们的效率,让我们无法集中精力在工作和学习上。再次,它影响了我们和他人交际的能力。(这里只有主题+观点123,没有支撑的部分,大家自己酌情补充)
***may caue a erie of problem. ***may give rie to a erie of unpleaant / undeirable conequence. Firt, it ha an extremely negative effect on our health, both phyical and mental.(threaten)Second, it affect our efficiency and make u fail to concentrate on our work and tudy. Third (Lat but not the leat,) it undermine our ability to communicate with other.
3.任何事物都有两面性,****也不例外。(或者:***是一把双刃剑,它既有好处,也有坏处)一方面(好处,有助于),另一方面(坏处,影响了)
Everything ha two ide —— *** i no exception. *** i a double-edged word ---- it ha both advantage and diadvantage.(---- it can be both a bleing and a cure.) On the one hand, …. On the other hand,…
第三段你的看法,建议(3句左右,自然收尾,可准备一些套话,考试时择机使用。尤其注意第一句不要写错。)
1.就我个人来说,我认为我们应该用一个理性的态度来对待****。我们要分清它的好处和坏处,合理的利用它。我们在做某事之前,要考虑它的好坏两个方面。
Peronally,in my view, in my opinion, a far a I am concerned, I ugget that we hould have a rational attitude to … we need to ditinguih between it advantage and diadvantage。We hould take both it poitive and negative ide into conideration before we do th.
2.为了改变这个局面,我们必须采取有效的措施来解决这个问题。(鉴于它的影响,我们必须找到解决的方案)
(要解决这个问题,需要学校和学生的共同努力。一方面,学校应该制定一些规章制度来惩罚,来预防。。。另一方面,学生要加强自己的诚信,自律意识。)
To change thi ituation, we mut take ome effective meaure and action to olve the problem.
(Conidering it bad influence, we mut find ome olution to it.)
(To olve the problem need the joint effort of both chool and tudent. On the one hand, chool hould etablih a ytem or make ome rule and regulation to punih / prevent … On the other hand, tudent hould raie their awarene of honety and elf-control)
