题目：Self-help Traveling
1、越来越多的大学生选择自助游
2、也会带来一些问题
3、我的看法
高分作文：
Many univerity tudent prefer a elf-help travelling to a packaged one, becaue they do not have to follow a rigidly-planned chedule. In addition, thee young people can tay in and enjoy a pot they find facinating while leave immediately a cene that they regard not o captivating. Another important reaon i that ome tudent are not willing to pay a big um on accommodation, o intead, they make do with living in a cheaper place.
It cannot be denied that elf-help travelling i le afe. A trip into remote area or mountain may turn out to be riky. Thee young people have neither ufficient experience in dealing with emergencie nor do they have omebody to reort to. They might be lot in a place without communication and nobody know their ituation.
Independent travelling, a far a I am concerned, would be an enjoyable and cot-effective choice a long a it i nearby. For young traveler, before tarting, they are uppoed to make enough preparation, including route, accommodation and neceary emergency aid.
点评：
Excellent!高分作文!结构安排合理，语言通顺流畅，用词丰富，继续保持!