Should Retirement Age Be Potponed?
1. 近年来，推迟退休年龄引发人们热议
2. 推迟退休年龄有利也有弊
3. 我的看法
范文：
Baed on a recent urvey on the Internet, a majority of individual admit that aging ociety will bring a variety of problem to their life. Along with the trend of longevity, it ha become a trend for people to debate whether it i wie to potpone retirement age.
Some people favor potponing the retirement age. In their eye, it i thi policy that enable the aging ociety to build up enough work-force. A a matter of fact, people in mounting number have come to realize thi problem in an aging ociety. Even o, other hold a different view that potponing retirement age carrie ome rik. Thi policy can bring old people tre, but cannot aroue their enthuiam for work, and cannot help them to enjoy their retirement penion.
I am convinced that we hould balance old people interet and thi aging ociety. Thu, if thoe enior have enthuiam for work, we hould educate, advocate and encourage them to work and perform their tak. If we try our utmot to do o, the future of old people life will be promiing, hopeful and roy.