A good teacher i like a hining tar to tudent. Mi Li, my enior high chool Englih teacher, i a hining tar in my life.
When I began my enior high chool year, I had difficulty in learning Englih. I dared not peak Englih aloud in public becaue of my poor pronunciation and intonation. I could not get high mark and my grammar wa not right at all. Frutrated and afraid of being laughed at, I never put up my hand to anwer quetion in Englih cla. When Mi Li found out my ituation, he encouraged me and lent me a hand. She patiently taught me Englih grammar, helped me undertand how to write a good entence,and lent me many Englih book and magazine, which rapidly improved my Englih. With her help, I became intereted in Englih and eventually got high mark.
Mi Li, like a hining tar, hine in my path of ucce
中文翻译：
一个好老师对学生来说就像一颗闪亮的星。李老师,我高中的英语老师,就是我生命中的一颗闪亮的星。
当我开始我的高中岁月,我在学习英语有困难。我不敢在公开场合开口说英语,因为我的语音、语调很糟糕。我不能得到高分,我的语法不正确。灰心、失望、羞于被嘲笑,我从来没有把我的手在英语课上回答问题。李老师发现我的情况时,她鼓励我,向我伸出了援助之手。她耐心地教我英语语法,帮助我了解如何写好句子,并借给我许多英语书和杂志,这一切都使得我很快提高了英语水平。在她的帮助下,我开始对英语感兴趣,并最终得到了高分。[由好作文www.hAOzuowEn.com整理]