雅思小作文饼状图技巧
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雅思小作文饼状图技巧

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在雅思的学术类小作文中我们经常会遇到饼状图写作,不要看着一张一张的图,就退缩了,但是相对来说,这个题型还是比较容易写的一种图形,不过学生们也一定不要当做这是一件简单的事情,想要拿高分还是需要努力的。以下是小编整理的雅思小作文饼状图技巧,欢迎阅读。

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The pie chart how the main reaon for migration to and from the UK in 2007.

Summarize the information by electing and reporting the main feature and make comparion where relevant.

Write at leat 150 word

Sample Anwer

The pie chart illutrate the primary reaon that people came to and left the UK in 2007.

At firt glance it i clear that the main factor influencing thi deciion wa employment. Having a definite job accounted for 30 per cent of immigration to the UK, and thi figure wa very imilar for emigration, at 29%. A large number of people, 22%, alo emigrated becaue they were looking for a job, though the proportion of people leaving the UK for thi purpoe wa noticeably lower at le than a fifth. Another major factor influencing a move to the UK wa for formal tudy, with over a quarter of people immigrating for thi reaon. However, interetingly, only a mall minority, 4%, left for thi.WWw.hAOZUowEn.com

The proportion of thoe moving to join a family member were quite imilar for immigration and

emigration, at 15% and 13% repectively. Although a ignificant number of people (32%) gave ‘other’ reaon or did not give a reaon why they emigrated, thi accounted for only 17% with regard to immigration.

通过上面的这道题以及给出的范文,可以看出饼状图的文章是很好模仿的,或者说是有一个模板的

下面是一些如何组织语句的要点:

1、选择最重要的一个点放在第一个写

从范文中可以看出,换工作,找工作和读书是作者首先提到的,因为这是选择搬家的主要原因。被囊括在其他里的是不那么重要的原因或者只是一小部分人群,所以他们可以被放在结尾再写

2、让句子容易被理解

在写小作文的时候,应该尽可能将信息串在一条逻辑线路上,使文章更容易理解。

在饼状图中,最能体现逻辑的就是进行对比,将文章重心放在描述两张图的相似点和不同点上,而不是将他们分开描述。

如果分别描述图表,阅读的人就需要不断的在两张图之间切换,自己去发现两张图的不同点在哪里。可以看到在范文里面,作者并没有这样做。

3、语言要丰富

在任何小作文中,这点都是很重要的,考生不应该不断的重复同一种结构。写饼状图时最重要的句子就是描述比例的那几句。

通常考生都会用 "the proportion of..."or "the percentage of..."

但事实上,还有很多其他的词组可以用,比如:

A large number of people

over a quarter of people

a mall minority

A ignificant number of people

le than a fifth

思小作文饼状图范例1

Tak:The pie chart how the proportion of the energy produced from different ource in a country between 1985 and 2003.

参考范文:

The pie chart preent the change of the percentage of the energy produced from variou ource in a particular country from 1985 to 2003.

It i clear that oil wa the mot dominant ource from which the energy wa produced throughout the whole period, although it dropped from 52% in 1985 to 39%. Likewie, nuclear alo declined, but much le ignificantly to 17%, becoming the third primary ource from which the energy wa produced.

The percentage of natural ga, on the other hand, witneed the mot noticeable increae during the period, riing from 13% in 1985 to 23% in 2003. Coal and other renewable reource, though whoe increae wa le marked, riing by 5% and 3% repectively.

Interetingly, the proportion of the energy produced from the hydrogen remained table in 1985 and 2003, making it the leat ued ource from which the energy wa produced.

Overall, oil, natural ga and nuclear till contitute a larger proportion of all the ource, while other three ource, namely coal, hydrogen and other renewable, are le ued when producing the energy.

雅思小作文饼状图范例2

The pie chart below how the main reaon why agricultural land become le productive. The table how how thee caue affected three region of the world during the

1990 .

Summarize the information by electing and reporting the main feature, and make comparion where relevant.

Sample Anwer:

The given information how the main reaon of land get le productive and alo how the effect of land loing it productivity in three different region of the world during 1990 .

A i preented in the graph, over-grazing & deforetation are two main reaon for land becoming le productive and thee two reaon contribute to 65% of thi hort of le productivity of land. Another important reaon for land are getting le productive i over cultivation which i 28% reaon for thi effect. All other reaon caue 7% of thi decreaed productivity of land.

The reaon for which the land degraded vary region to region and according to the table data, European land are getting le productive by 23% in 1990 becaue of deforetation, over-cultivation and over-grazing. Deforetation wa the major reaon why the European land got le productive and it wa 9.8% while two other reaon were around 5% to 7%. In Oceana region which compried a large portion of South Pacific Iland, Autralia and New Zealand had 13% decreae of land’ procuring capability and over-cultivation wa not the reaon there. Finally North American countrie were le affected (only 5%) for thoe man created reaon of land’ decreae in productivity.