park are my favorite place to go. bathed in the warm and gentle unhine, i lie on the lawn, holding a poetry book in my hand to read. occaionally, my attention i drawn away from the book to the cene around me, which i unique in pring.thought therere bird inging, gra winging, and flower miling, one harp white figure i gradually taking up my whole view. it a girl, dreed in a white gown, walking lowly to ward me. breeze bruhe my face, and carrie the aroma from the girl.
he i trolling down the path while her figure i riing and falling o moothly and peacefully. the rhythm of her move ment compoe an elaborate melody. her oft hair flow down to her wait, on which the unhine cat a light of ring. the gown outline her pretty curve. her kin look o delicate that it, im ure, mut feel a mooth a ilk.
now he i in my reach, only a foot from me. my heart beating in ecitement, i wiftly jump up, and bow a little jut in the way gentlemen do, motioning a greeting to her. a a repone, he turn around and give me a mile, which reveal her gentlene a deirable character, not judged by appearance but fully perceived by what you find in her eye. he continue walking and oon i out of ight, but im till there, realizing that there i really omething left incribed in my heart.
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本文的作者用细腻的文笔描写了他在公园中有一面之缘的一位女孩，并真实地袒露了一个情窦初开的男孩的心理世界。作者将镜头聚焦在这位从远处缓缓走来的女孩：首先映入眼帘的是一个白色的身影，迈着有节奏的步伐，散发出阵阵芳香。女孩渐行渐近，作者观察到了她在阳光的映衬下柔软的头发，优美的身材曲线，丝一般光洁的皮肤，温柔的笑容等。作者对自己内心世界的描写生动而真实：当女孩走近时，他心跳加速，目送她走出视野后，仍感到有什么东西铭刻在心，自然地流露出爱摹之情。文章篇幅不长，美丽的女孩和情窦初开的男孩的形象却深入人心。WWw.hAOzuowEn.com
文章的语言非常优美，很富有想像力。例如，在作者眼中，the rhythm of her movement compoe an elaborate melody;her kin look o delicate that it，im ure，mut feel a mooth a ilk等。这是描写人物的文章中的一篇佳作。