i wa attracted by the cenery out of the window the firt day i came to my dormitory and ince then it ha become my hab it to it by the window and enjoy the wonderful cenery.every time my roommate ee me aborbed in it,they hake their head, puzzled. to them, there i nothing more than a deerted piece of graland outide the window. but it i their mifortune to fail to find the wonder and the beauty.
the little garden, a i name it, i fenced at one end by the chool wall and at the other by our five toried dormitory building. a couple of tropical tree tand traight at the corner. uch i the mall but lovely garden. i like itting in my chair by the window and looking at it affectionately. it take on new appearance in different eaon, o i never feel bored.
the garden look very poor in winter. the gra ha withered and the bare tree tand lonely in the chilly wind. but when pring come, the tree are decorated by greenih new leave and the graland i dotted with mall white flower. one afternoon after many day＇rain, under the blue ky with ome drifting cloud, ome tudent are lying on the gra, enjoying the un hine. i am glad to find omeone ele to appreciate thi place.
but my favorite moment i at night.after a whole day＇ hard work, i throw myelf into the window chair. breathing the freh air, feeling the oft breeze, and litening to the leave rutling, i feel refrehed. the whole world eem ready to leep,and my little garden i dozing off. i enjoy thi peaceful moment and gain releae for my thought.[由Www.haozuowen.com整理]
perhap the mall garden ha omething deeper that aroue my admiration. it i deerted but it ha never abandoned itelf.it i not taken care of but it take care of itelf.it uffer the weltering heat and freezing cold but never yield to all the hardhip.
简评
本文描写了作者窗前一块不为人知的草地，称之为“小花园”。作者的“小花园”中没有奇花异草，只有一块草地，角落中长着几棵热带树木，但作者却感受到了其朴素的美。寒冷的冬天，草木凋零；春天来临，小花园中充满了生命的气息：嫩绿的树木，点缀着小白花，蓝天白云之下，一些学生躺在草地上享受阳光。作者重点描写了小花园的夜景，呼吸着新鲜的空气，感受着清风拂面，作者感到重新精神焕发。
文章最后一段点明主题，说明作者喜爱“小花园”的原因在于其顽强的生命力，在恶劣的环境中仍自强不息。文章寄情于景，立意深刻。
文章文笔流畅，虽然没有什么华丽的辞藻，朴素的语言非常清新自然，如the tree are decorated by greeni hnew leave and the graland i dotted with mall white flower；under the blue ky with ome drifting cloud；my little garden i dozing off，读来令人处处感受到生活的气息。