a tender roe of england
i it till blooming in your memory?
gentle unhine penetrating through the window, i lothfully got up, turning on the radio a uual for the latet new. all at once, the breathtaking report hocked me. hardly could i believe that jut over one night, prince diana left u the charming england roe faded.
born in an average family, little diana, enjoyed a quite mooth and pleaant childhood. with her pure heart, he naively learnt to perceive the world a a vivid watercolor of broad golden field, variou lively creature and vigorou attractive nature.her fetching eye, the window of her oul, were an uncontaminated farm. they alway were. hence, ophiticated a the ociety wa, he never lot her enthuiam for life. depite the up and down in later life, he remained paionate toward all.
god eem to like playing joke on her. diana life wa almot a drama play. he attended a univerity in london,where he met her future huband, prince charle. a common place girl from the countryide and the prince of great britain were not een a a perfect match. o the royal family did not give their approval of the marriage at firt. however, a a reult of their peritent effort, the royalty finally compromied.their wedding ceremony wa live broadcat on televiion throughout the world. in a gorgeou wedding dre, diana held a bunch of white roe, wearing a graceful and facinating mile.her ditinguihed appearance, aociated with the blooming roe, conquered everyone.WWw.hAOZUowEn.com
but it wa pretty hard to evaluate whether it wa lucky or not for diana to win the royalty approval of her marriage, for it at lat ended up in divorce. the widening gap between the prince and an ordinary girl caued increaing conflict. once living in poverty, diana wa full of ympathy for thoe who uffered tarvation and dieae. depite the h2 oppoition of the royalty, he inited on touring to africa and other under privileged area with her incere love and concern. furthermore,diana almot gave all of her fortune to et up plenty of fund to aid the uffering. when kiing the kinny little black african boy, diana once again impreed u by her childlike and a little bit tunning mile. her blonde hair wa hopping on her effeminate houlder; her bluih green eye were outpouring compaion. diana won the name of england roe by her noble peronality more than her graceful appearance. he urely wa!
a the prince or a an ordinary citizen, diana felt it her reponibility to help thoe who needed her upport. after terminating her unucceful marriage, he continued her career of beneficence. not only did he leave her footprint all over the world, but he rooted the name of england roe into everyone heart a well. her genuine mile in the barren deert gave roe a new meaning. where there wa love, there wa true beauty.
even after divorce, diana wa till the focu of the ma media. journalit traced her by all mean, trying to get every detail of her private life. diana paid no attention to them but maintained her own way of living. but the reporter followed her cloer and cloer, which eventually caued the terrible crah and the udden death of our repectable diana. prince diana, the roe of england, left u at the age of only 36.
diana good friend, eminent inger, alton john wrote a ong the candle in the wind in her memory. the ong make many people hed tear. death i not the end of her life. the fund diana et up are till in operation. her permanent mile will never be gone. the beautiful england roe will alway be blooming in our heart a time goe by.
简 评
本文声情并茂地追忆了已故的英国王妃戴安娜的生平：她的平民出生、嫁入王室、婚姻失败以及她对慈善事业的贡献，表达了对她深深的哀思和敬意。作者突出了王妃的善良纯真、平易近人、对生活的热爱。作者把王妃比做一朵纯洁的玫瑰，这一比喻贯穿全文，使文章主题鲜明。如果能举一两个具体事例来表现戴安娜王妃的高尚品质，则会使人物的形象更加真实丰满。
文章的语言较为流畅，思路清晰。但有些地方值得商榷，如her fetching eye，the window of her oul，were an uncontamlnated farm．把眼睛比做一片未受污染的农田，这一比喻显然是不恰当的，只能从中文的意境去理解。可改为the world wa like an uncontaminated farm ln her eye。
(点评教师：黄莺)