A Field Trip
It i a nice day. Our cla will have a field trip today. The clamate are very excited. Look! Here we are. Therere a lot of activitie to do. Amy i watching inect. Peter i collecting leave. They want to write a report. Mandy i catching butterflie in the wood. Tim and Bob are playing che. Some of the clamate are having a picnic. There i a lot of deliciou food to eat. Oh, who that over there? It Mi White. What i he doing? She i taking photo. We had a very good time. Ill never forget thi field trip.
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写法：这篇习作是按照郊游时的画面来描述的，记叙了同学们分别在郊游中做了哪些活动及郊游的感受。
时态：这篇文章可以用一般过去时和现在进行时来写。由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时，所以，这里我们采用现在进行时比较合适。
句型： . i/are doing th. She /He i doing th. Theyre doing th.
注意：活动的相关表述法采用新旧知识相结合去写。注意时态的转换、描写感受时用一般现在时。