【摘要】
在英文写作过程中,学生们常常“误入歧途”却自己不能察觉。一些常见的写作错误会出现在大部分考生的试卷上。比如审题不清,经常出现偏题或跑题;习惯汉语思维,逐字翻译;用词搭配不当,“张冠李戴”;词不达意,拼写错误严重;等等。具体来说,常见的错误主要有这些:指代方面的错误
在使用代词it,he,thi,that,which,one等时,前文中应出现明确的先行词。
如:“Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future,it i enele to force him to learn it.”,这句话中,him和it这两个代词都有明确的先行词,分别是a child和knowledge,因此句子的含义非常清楚。
可是,不少学生在使用这些代词时,虽然自己很清楚它们指代的是什么,但在作文中却没有交代清楚,结果这些代词非但没有使行文简洁,反而造成了意思上的模糊,让阅卷老师不知所云。
误:Sometime teacher will inform tudent of the heavy burden they have to bear.
正:Sometime the teacher will inform tudent of the heavy burden he ha to bear.
【说明】句1中的they既可指教师,也可指学生,属指代不清的。可以把它们中的任意一个改成单数名词。因为单数名词也可以泛指一类。[由好作文www.hAOzuowEn.com整理]
修饰方面的错误
修饰语应紧靠被修饰的成分,并和它形成正确的逻辑关系。如果修饰语的位置不妥当,就会造出模棱两可的病句。
误:To keep the air clean, we mut move the factorie which give off poionou gae to the countryide.
正:To keep the air clean, we mut move the factorie to the countryide if they give off poionou gae.
【说明】句1要表达的是把有害气体排放到农村,还是把工厂迁到农村去?显然修饰语to the countryide的位置放错了。如句2改变一下结构,就能清楚地表达要表达的意思了。
一致方面的错误
在一个句子内部或紧邻的两三个句子之间,要保持时态、人称、数等的一致。
误:Whether one enjoy or reent advertiement, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.
正:Whether we enjoy or reent advertiement, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.
【说明】代词应与所指代的先行词保持人称和数上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoy or reent the advertiement, he i actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.
平行结构方面的错误
这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。
1、误:Narrow treet eaily caue to happen many traffic accident.
正:narrow treet eaily caue many traffic accident. (to happen)
误:A great change ha been taken place ince then.
正:A great change ha taken place ince then.
误:But it may occur ome new problem.
正:But ome new problem may occur/arie.
误:Opportunitie are only belonged to thoe who work hard.
正:Opportunitie only belong to thoe who work hard.
【说明】happen,take place,occur,arie等动词和动词词组一般既不能用作被动结构,也不能作为及物动词带宾语的。但学生作文中类似的错误较多:Our country ha taken place a great change in many field.
2、误:The pace of our modern life i getting more fater and fater.
正:The pace of our modern life i getting fater and fater.
误:Electricity i the mot important power in our daily life than other kind of power.
正:Electricity i the mot important power in our daily life.
误:Thu our city will be greatly beautiful than it i now.
正:Thu our city will be far more beautiful than it i now.
【说明】这些都是在使用比较形式时出现的错误。尤其是第1例较普遍。如more eaier,more h2er等。
断句方面的错误
一句句子没有结束,又开始新的一句,结果造成句子结构不全,这就成为断句。
误:TV become an important part in our daily life. Becaue we cannot live without it.
正:TV become an important part in our daily life,becaue we cannot live without it.
【说明】以becaue,ince,if等引导的从句是不能独立成句的,只能依属于主句,所以不能写成另一句。
连词方面的错误
作文中缺少必要的连词,或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。
误:One hould improve hi Englih,one hould overcome difficultie in tudie.
正:If one want to improve hi Englih,he hould overcome difficultie in tudie.
【说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要,不善于使用连词和连接副词来明确标示出因果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。
搭配方面的错误
学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。曾经在一次六级作文阅卷中,近千篇作文在表达“上海交通越来越拥挤”这个意思时,几乎没有一篇用 heavier,大多数人用的是The traffic in Shanghai i getting more and more crowded,而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。
1、误:However the peed of a car i much fater than that of a bicycle.
正:However the peed of a car i much higher than that of a bicycle.
【说明】peed只能和high,low,good,top,normal,fantatic,moderate,urpriing等搭配,不能与fat,quick,low搭配。但可以这样说A car i much fater in peed than a bicycle.
2、误:In the pat the price of milk wa o expenive that mot familie could not afford it.
正:In the pat the price of milk wa o high that mot familie couldn’t afford it.
【说明】price只和high,low,inflated,moderate,minimum,original,popular,prevailing,publihed,reduced,reaonable等搭配,不能与expenive,cheap搭配,但可以说In the pat,milk wa o expenive that mot familie couldn’t afford it.
由此可见,要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力,除了要在平时的阅读过程中多积累,还需要克服中文中诸如“速度快”、“价格贵”、“学习知识”、“人减少”等搭配的影响,避免写出look book或ee book这样的笑话来。
误用方面
学生作文中对词语的误用也相当普遍,误用词语不仅不能准确地表达作者的意思,而且也会闹出笑话。
1、误:With the indutriou development,there i a great need for different kind of energy.
正:With the indutrial development,there i a great need for different kind of energy.
2、误:Mot big citie are plagued by traffic jam which effect our daily life.
正:Mot big citie are plagued by traffic jam which affect our daily life.
【说明】以上错句都是因为对形容词的辨析不清而造成的。Indutriou是“勤劳的”,“工业上的”应为indutrial。effect一般用作名词,其动词形式表示“产生、实现”,而这里的意思是“影响”,应换成affect。
