新托福考试的最后一部分是写作,要求考生写2篇文章,第一篇叫做综合写作(Integrated writing),让考生用3分钟时间先读一篇约250字的文章,然后听一段2分钟关于对所读内容的评论。再让考生写一篇150到225个字的文章。这篇文章的写作满分详解及满分模板作者早已给出。
第二篇作文叫独立写作,和笔考、机考均无两样,给定考生一熟悉的话题,让考生在30分钟内写一篇300字的文章。典型的问法是:Do you agree or diagree with the following tatement? One hould never judge a peron by external appearance. Ue pecific reaon and detail to upport you anwer.不少同学又跟笔者要独立写作满分详解及满分模板。实际上独立写作详解和模板笔者在很多年前便给出了模板,但不知何故网上和笔者的电脑中再也寻不着。只有提起笔来结合笔者再次参加新托福考试的经验给各位同学重新总结新托福独立写作模板和高分写作技巧。
一、熟悉和理解新托福4大评分标准是高分关键
评分标准1:effectively addree the writing topic and tak.
要求考生有效地阐明主题,考生千万不要跑题。从笔者的教学经验看,考生全部跑题现象较少,但是局部跑题现象十分严重,这也是考生不能轻取高分的缘故。WWw.hAOzuowEn.com
评分标准2:well organized and well developed 逻辑条理清楚,发展充分。每次作者在讲写作时总是把它和阅读相对照。各位考生要想拿到独立写作满分必须真正理解八股文的结构,千万不要写中国式的八股文,而应写出美式八股文。
评分标准3:ue pecific detail and example to upport you view 考生的论据一定要具体、明确,且对论点有支持作用,而不能空洞和泛泛而谈。
评分标准4:diplay language facility by demontrating yntactic variety, word choice and idiom.(通过谴词造句和习惯表达来展示语言的熟练程度)这一点是各位考生经常忽视, 迷惘和不清楚的一点。新托福作文占总分120分的30分。我们对大家的要求是在作文上花的时间既要少又要拿高分,至少28分。凡是想拿到28分甚至满分以上的同学一定要注意此项评分标准。能用firt千万不要用firtly,能用finally千万不要用lat but not leat. 不少同学花了很多功夫背这一外国人都不用的词组,能用常用的词千万不要用偏词,同时我们要熟练掌握ETS喜欢的5大语法结构和2种从句。
作文要不要写?当然要写,但我建议考生不要写的太多,写一篇要像一篇,最好让行家改2-3篇。我曾经碰到一个学生把185篇中的184篇均写了。拿给我看,结果同样的错误在184篇均反复出现,让我哭笑不得,一问才知说是老师这么教的。学托福需要勤奋,但像这种勤奋就等于浪费青春岁月。
作文要不要背?最好不要通篇背,可以背一些经典的句型。倘若真要背,一定要认准此篇作文是范文的情况下才能背。
这4个评分标准哪条更重要?这主要取决于考生对作文考分的期望值。若要考满分,此4点均重要。千万不能跑题,一跑题可就是0分了。考试费也就白交了。
二、新托福独立写作满分模板
When it come to the quetion of , different people might have different anwer. In my view, I think that_________________ can , and . The reaon go a follow.
The main reaon for my view i that .
Firt of all, Second,
Finally,
So, .
Another reaon for my view i that .
On one hand, . For example,
. In addition, .
Finally, .
(分理由1) . (分理由2) .
In concluion, baed on the reaon I dicued above,(pleae rewrite the firt paragraph in another way).
新托福写作并不难,不管你中文写作好还是不好,只要真正掌握了写作方法和要求,再写出3-5篇作文。考个满分绝不是什么大惊小怪的事。越来越多同学来阳光学校学托福和托福写作。关键原因是同学们在掌握了我们教的方法后一方面能从容应对写作,更能在写作中取得高分或满分的成绩!
每个人都会说work hard and work mart.但大多数人均没有做到,至少在备战新托福及新托福写人上没做到。
托福作文模板推荐之一
A or B
Depending on peronal experience, peronality type and emotional concern, we find that ome people hold the idea of A meanwhile other prefer to B, from my point of view, it i more adviable to choe A rather than B. My argument for thi point are lited a follow.
The main reaon for my propenity for A i that___________________________.就理由进行解释_____________________.For intance,____________________
Another reaon can be een by every one i that____________________________.就理由进行解释___________________For example,____________________
The argument I upport in the firt paragraph i alo in a poition of advantage becaue_____________________________
Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantage of B, I feel that the diadvantage are more obviou. Such a________________.
In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it i agaciou to upport the tatement that it i better to A.
托福作文模板推荐之二
A or B
将原题复述___________________________________________When faced with the deciion of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but other, in contrat, believe A/B a the premier choice and that i alo my point. Among countle factor which influence -A/-B, there are three conpicuou apect a follow.
The main reaon for my propenity fo _________i that___________________
The econd reaon can be een by every peron that________.
In addition, thee reaon are alo uable when we conider that_________.
There are ome diadvantage in____________________另一种观点的缺点__________.
In a word, _____________重复观点句并缩写理由__________________.Takingintoaccount of all thee factor, we may reach the concluion that___________.
托福作文模板推荐之三
单一命题式
The anwer of thi tatement depend on your own experience and life tyle. In my point view, buying computer i a important a, if not more important than, buying book. So it i agaciou to ____________.Among countle factor which influence the choice, thee are three conpicuou apect a follow.
The main reaon for my propenity for__________i that____________.
Another reaon can be een by every peron i that________________.
Futhermore,______________.
In hort,_________________复述前文中的理由______________.
托福作文模板推荐之四
agree or diagree
Some people argue a if it i a general truth that a _____________________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerou reaon why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary one here.
The main problem with thi argument i that it i ignorant o the baic fact that______________解释本段中心___________.
Another reaon why I diagree with the above tatement i that I believe that______________.
What i more, ome tudent are intereted in____________.
In a word, ________________.
托福作文模板推荐之五
A or B
Some people prefer to A. other believe B. When faced with the deciion of A or B, quite a few would claim that______________, but other, in contrat , deem A/B a the premier choice and that i alo my point. There are numerou reaon why___________, and I would explore only a few of the mot important one here. The main reaon why I agree with the above tatement, however, i that_____________________. Take___________a example, ______________. There i another factor that deerve ome word here. Such a ________________________.
Similarly, thee reaon are alo uable when we conider that______________.(exmaple:___________).
From the above you might got idea that I agree______________.(repeat the above three reaon____________).So, it i agaciou to upport the tatement that it i better to _______________.
托福作文模板推荐之六
Agree or diagree
Some people prefer to A, other believe B, Nowaday ome may hold the opinion that ________________, but other have a negative attitude. A far a I am concerned, I agree/diagree that_______________. MY argument for thi point are lited a follow.
One of the primary caue i that_______________________.
Example_______________.
But there i a fruther more ubtle point we mut conider. Example.
What i more_______________. Example___________
General peaking, __________. Recongizing the fact that _______________hould drive u to conclude that______________.
托福作文模板推荐之七
A or B
In my point of view, A i a important a, if not more important than B. So it i agaciou to chooe A. Among count le factor which influence A. there are three conpicuou apect a follow.
The above point i certainly true if A i conidered. For exmaple,___________________
Another reaon why I agree with the above tatement i that I believe that A i better than B. For intance,_______________
It would probably not be too kindly dipoed to the idea that B i not important . B________也好_________.
In a word, to chooe A or B i omething of a dilemma to the public becaue they ometime are confued by the eemingly good qualitie of B, and neglect hte genuinely good apect of A. For the reaon preented above, I h2ly commit to the notion that A, but not B.
托福作文模板推荐之八
A or B
When faced with the deciion of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but other, in contrat, deem B a the premier choice and that i alo my point. Thi quite different view i baed on the propenity of following point. We may lookintoevery poible reaon, however, fore mot reaon for B i ____________________. For example, ______________.
Alo, ________________________.
Thi i arbitray to judge B according only to the excue I mentioned in the above paragraph.
Similarly, thee reaon are alo uable when we conider that________________. Admittedly, __________________A也有好的地方______________.By he ame token, however, ______________B更好____________.Takingintoaccount of all thee factor, we may reach the concluion that_____________.
托福作文模板推荐之九
A or B
When it come to______________, Neverthele, in my part, I prefer A rather than B a my inclination. My argument for thi point are lited a follow. I agree with the tatement that _________without reervation ince___________.
Naturally___________.It can be given a concrete example__________. A more eential factor why I advocate the argument of __________i that. Obviouly ________________.Take the cae of a thing that____________. Futhermore, what i worth noticing fact i that ________________. Thi demontrate the undeniable fact that__________________. Of coure, chooing B alo ha advantage to ome extent,_______________此处论述B的1-2优点___________.But if all thee factor are contemplated, the advantage of A carry more weight than thoe of B. From what ha been dicued above, we may finally draw the concluion that_____________.
托福作文模板推荐之十
____________改写并复述题目____________. There may be by one or two diadvantage to ___________________; however, I believe that there are far more advantage. My argument for thi point are lited a follow.
Firt of all, perhap one diadvantage to____________i that______________.For intance, __________________. Another drawback to _____________involve the poibility that____________. For example, ____________. Even though there may be one or two diadvantage to____________, the advantage far outweigh them. The main reaon for my propenity for __________i that _________. For exmaple_____________.
Another reaon for my inclination for _____________ i that _________________. For example, _________________.
In a word, in pite of the fact that there may be a couple of diadvantage to _____________, I feel that the advantage are more obviou___________.重复优点__________.Takingintoaccount of all thee factor, we may reach the concluion that _____________.
托福作文模板推荐之十一
A or B
____________改写并复述题目____________.The advantage of B carry more weight than thoe of A. There are numerou reaon why __________, and I would explore only a few of the mot important one here. One of the primary caue i that_______________________.
What i alo worth noticing fact i that_____________________.
Futhermore, ________________________.
Although I agree that there may be couple of diadvantage to_________________.I fell that the advantage are more obviou_____________. _______________, Given the factor I have jut outlined, I can only ay that___________________.
托福作文模板推荐之十二
A or B
____________改写并复述题目____________.When faced withe deciion of A or B, quite a few would claim that ___________, but other, in contrat, deem A/B a the premier choice and that i alo my point. Among countle factor which influence _________, there are three conpicuou apect a follow. The main reaon for my propenity for ________________ i that _____________. Another reaon can be een by every peron i that___________________. The argument I upport in the firt paragraph i alo in a poition of advantage becaue ________________________.
In a word, ___________________. Takingintoaccount of all thee factor, we may reach the concluion that ____________________.
托福作文模板推荐之十三
A or B
From my point of view, it i adviable to chooe A rather than B. My argument for thi point are lited a follow.
The main reaon for my propenity for ____________________ i that ________________.
There i another factor that deerve ome word here.
In a word, ________________________. While it i true that the argument, I diagree hold a little bit of water, I think_______________.
托福作文模板推荐之十四
agree or diagree
Nowaday, ome may hold the opinion that ____________________. But other have a negative attitude. A far a I am concerned, I agree that ____________. My argument for thi point are lited a follow. I agree with the tatement that ______________________without reervation ince ________________.
Another reaon why I agree with the above tatement i that I believe that________________.
In a word, _________________________. Takingintoaccount of all thee factor, we may reach the concluion that__________.
托福作文模板推荐之十五
agree or diagree
Some people argue a if it i a general truth that a _____________________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerou reaon why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary one here.
The main problem with thi argument i that it i ignorant o the baic fact that______________解释本段中心___________.
Another reaon why I diagree with the above tatement i that I believe that______________.
What i more, ome tudent are intereted in____________.
In a word, ________________.
