In the pring,we can flying kite.pring a very beautiful.I Believe everyone love pring.
In the pring ,i heve a picnic in the park .we look ome duck in the pond,they are lovely,ky not have a cloud. o todayout of the quetion rain oon.
I heard the weather forecat ‘’it will be unny in handong'.we are in the park the un i hining and the wind i blowing ,linda and i are playing hinde and eek.the bird are inging.the rabbit are jimping.the weather i very good.a man i wearing a big hat.ome clildren are jumping in the water. we are having a lovely time！Bye-bye.
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Sring i very beautiful. I believe everyone love pring. In pring, we can fly kite. In pring, we can have a picnic in the park. There, we can ee ome lovely duck playing in the pond.The un i hining brightly, the wind i blowing gently and the bird are inging happily. Linda and I are playing hide and eek. The weather i very good. We are having a great time.