Would you wanna me to write you an article?
追问:能帮我写一篇么?
补充:可以,你大概想表达什么?
追问:
我想在高一更努力学习,多结交朋友,同时多参加课外活动,拓展自己的视野,锻炼自己的动手能力。
(词汇尽量用初中的,谢谢)
补充:
高一更努力学习,多结交朋友,同时多参加课外活动,拓展自己的视野,锻炼自己的动手能力。
My new plan of Grade one Ihave been aenior tudent for ome time and Ithink it' time for me to et goal in my Grade one.Firtly,I mut try my bet to work hard becaue tudy i important for me.Secondly,I want to take part in different activitie after chool.At the ame time,I can not only make more friend but ee more thing.Finally,I am uppoed to help my clamate and teacher who need help and then Iam able to improve my ability of practicing.
(It' time for b.to do th.not only…but alo…at the ame time;be uppoed to do th.;be able to这些句型你们都应该学过吧?)
其实这作文还有润色的地方:
I have been aenior tudent for ome time and Ithink it' time for me to et goal in my Grade one.Firtly,I mut try my bet to(work hard/put my heart in tudy)becaue tudy i important for(me/u tudent我们学生).Secondly,I want to take part in different(activitie after chool在课外参加活动/out-of-chool activitie课外活动).At the ame time,I can not only make more friend but(ee more thing我是这样表达拓展视野,高一没有学到,真正的拓展视野是broaden one horizon).(Finally/Lat but not leat),I am uppoed to help my clamate and teacher(who need help/who are in trouble)and then Iam able to improve my hand-on kill.[由www.hAozuowEn.com整理]
第一篇是基础文,第二篇改进后是中等文。我不知道你的英语偏差的程度,但是英语作文一定要用英语思维,就是记住句型,用英语表达,不能强行用中文思维想好再翻译!还有多悟!
