My father I have father,he＇ tall and trong,he＇very kind. he like Saturday and Sunday,he often piay ping-pong,watch TV and read bok. he like poer、tofu、cabbage and fih. I like my father!
名师点评：
I am o happy!Becaue you can write a good Englih compoition. From it I know you have a wonderful father.You mut love him very much. But there are ome pelling mitake in your compoition.It doe not matter.You are the bet.I hope I can core your Englih compoition any more.
老师很高兴你能上传英语作文。从文中老师能感悟到你有一个非常慈爱的父亲。你一定很爱很爱他。但是美中不足的是文中有些许英文的拼读错误，没关系的，你是最优秀的。老师真心希望以后你能上传更多优秀的作文，加油！继续努力哦！