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我的同学My Classmate英语作文

时间:2018-01-20 11:14:00 | 编辑:王晓坤

范文:我的同学 My Clamate

请以"My Clamate"为标题写一篇记叙文

要求:1、主题明确,语言流畅,思路清晰。 2、字数在100字以内。

思路点拨:

写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。

这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。

参考范文

My Clamate

Liu Kai i my clamate. He i a good tudent and alway ready to help other.

One day on hi way to chool,he aw a little girl croing the road. A car wa coming toward her quickly and the girl wa too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Jut then LiuKai ruhed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl wa aved. She told him where he lived,and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the claroom,the teacher had already begun hi leon. He told the teacher why he wa late. He wa then praied for what he had done.