【内容提示】
你有一位老师,你很敬重他(或她)。这位老师对你的帮助很大。你学习有困难时他(或她)鼓励你;你找上门求教时他(或她)和蔼耐心地给予帮助;他(或她)懂几种语言,这使你很佩服。同学们和这位老师处得很融洽,常在一起搞活动。请你通过多种事情写这位老师。
【作文示范】
A Foreign Englih Teacher
Our chool, Shiyan Middle School in Fuling, wa founded only four year ago. It i rather a new chool, but now it i getting well-known for it teahing. We have a foreign Englih teacher, named Han Barthel. He i the only foreign Englih teacher in all the chool in our city.
Han i a tall man with blue eye. He come from Munich①, in Germany. That i to ay, German i hi native language and yet he mater everal foreign language, including Englih. He teache u poken Englih. I till remember the firt time he aked me to anwer a very eay quetion, but I wa too nervou to anwer it, tanding dumbfounded②. He miled, encouraged me and let me it down. From then on, I made up my mind to tudy Englih harder.
One evening I plucked up ③ my courage to viit Han. When I rang the doorbell, he came out and let me in. At firt I wa a bit nervou when talking with him. To make me feel eay he poke very lowly, and I could undertand quite well. I wa o glad that I felt quite at home. Now, I alway go to hi room on Saturday. We talk a lot and watch TV together. With hi help, my poken Englih greatly improved.WWw.hAOZUowEN.com
Han i learning Chinee all by himelf. He can peak ome Chinee now. He can talk with our Chinee teacher. If he doen't know how to ay a certain thing in Chinee, he will ak u to teach him till he can ay it correctly.
On Chritma I ent him a gift, which he accepted. He pent that evening merrily with u Chinee tudent and didn't feel lonely at all. ( fw.neac.com编辑发布)
Thi i Han, a kind man and a good Englih teacher.
【词语解释】
①Munich ['mju:nik] n.慕尼黑(德国城市)
②dumbfounded [d)m'faundid] a.惊讶得发呆的
③pluck [pl)k] up 鼓起;振作;振作精神
【写法指要】
本文通过几件事写了外籍教师Han的为人和工作态度。第一段对是作者所在学校的简介。第二段介绍Han的基本情况及Han对“我”的鼓励。第三段写作者与Han的接触和Han帮“我”提高口语的情况。第四段写Han自学汉语的情况。第五段写“我们”与Han一起过圣诞节。第六段总结:Han是一个热心的人,一个好英语老师。
