满分的高考英文作文分析
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满分的高考英文作文分析

时间:2015-08-23 09:54:06 | 编辑:王晓坤

作文题目

假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。

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注意:1.词数:100左右:

2.参考词汇:房租—Tent(n.).

I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinee here. I have already found a fiat for you. It i on Fangcao Street, which i not far from Jianxin Chinee School. Bu No.11 can take you there, and it i one top before the Chinee School. The flat i on the third floor with 3 room, one of which i bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a ofa, a dek and ome chair in thi 25 quare-metre mall fiat, and the rent i 500 yuan per month. Maybe thi fiat i not a good a your wih, but I’ll try my bet to meet your need. If it i not uitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

Hope you will come here oon!

All the bet!

Your,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。[由好作文www.hAOzuowEn.com整理]