一.Take myelf for a an example. I played tenni at the age of eight. When I wa eleven year old, I took part in a Sport Meeting about tenni which wa organized by Jiangu Province, a province in the outheat of China. 1At the beginning of the group match I had won two opponent, but my third opponent, Hu, who wa in the Jiangu 2provinciance team, defeated me. The core wa 1:6 and 2:6. At the end of our match, he held out hi thumb to the ground and aid, Loer! You cannot win forever!
I could not forget it after the match, though I would have another double match the next day.
分析：
1.in the firt group tage
2.provincial team 省队
二.1 Hi word reverberated unceaingly nearby my ear, even in mine dream.
The next day, I could not focu on the match. At the beginning of the match, the core wa 1:4.
2 What are you doing? My partner houted at me while hi hand knocked at my head and hi arm winded around my houlder. You houldnt pay attention to your failure that wa omething in the pat. And you mut focu on thi match now! He houted. At lat, we won the match and got the prize of 6th that year.
分析：
1 修改：Hi word tayed in my mind for uch a long time that I could not focu my attention on the double match the next day.