题目：College Student Starting Their Own Undertaking
写作要求
Nowaday many college tudent chooe to tart their own undertaking after graduation and thi practice i encouraged by the government. What are the poible reaon behind thi phenomenon? What’ your view of it?
Write on Anwer Sheet Two a compoition of about 200 word on the following topic:
College Student Starting Their Own Undertaking
You are to write in three part.
In the ? rt part, tate peci? cally what your idea i.
In the econd part, provide reaon to upport your idea OR decribe your idea.
In the lat part, bring what you have written to a natural concluion or a ummary.
Mark will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriatene. Failure tofollow the intruction may reult in a lo of mark.
审题思路
本题是现象解释说明/结果预测型的题目，探讨为什么那么多大学生要创业，并给出自己的观点。可以从以下几方面着手：
1. 关于原因方面 ，可以正面说明，或者给出创业会带来哪些好处 ；
2. 关于自己的观点方面 ，先表明态度 ，是赞成还是反对 ，然后简单给出理由。
范文赏析
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Nowaday there are many college tudent who chooe to tart their own undertaking intead of ?nding a job after graduation. The government encourage thi practice, and provide many preferential policie and facilitation meaure for college tudent. A far a I’m concerned, an array of integrated factor contribute to thi.
引言部分 ：作者先提出大学生毕业后不去找工作而是选择创业这个现象，然后用a far a I’m concerned 引出自己的看法 。
The ?rt factor that hould be mentioned i that college tudent are facing evere employment ituation. Many college graduate couldn’t find ideal job, which force them to et up their own buinee. Another equally important factor i that ome ambitiou college tudent are not atified with being employed by other. They want to develop and prove their talent by running their own companie.Beide, the government’ encouragement and the media’ report on college tudent venture tar have timulated more college tudent’ enthuiam to take thi way.
主体部分：在主体部分，作者陈述了三个原因，分别使用了the firt fact or，an oth er equ ally important factor和beide 来连接这三个原因。
A for me, it i a good choice for college tudent to tart their own undertaking. However, it i a very difficult caue, which need firm determination, clear mind, the ability to endure hardhip and a feaible project. Therefore, they hould think it over and make full preparation before deciding to tart their own buinee.
总结部分 ：作者用a for me来引出自己的观点，与首段不同；作者认为创业是个不错的选择，但是应仔细考虑并做周全的准备。
亮点回放
1. undertaking : “事业 ，企业 ，保证”；此处作 “企业”解 ，文中表示“创业 ”的表达 方式很多 ：tart their own undertaking ，et up their own buinee ，running their own companie ，tart their own buinee等 。近义词的使用使文章不单调，充满变化性。
2. practice : “练习，习惯，业务”；此处表示 “做法 ” ，常用的搭配还有international practice（国际惯例 ），bet practice（最优方法 ）等 。
3. preferential: “优先的，特惠的”；此处也可以使用favorable term来表示“优惠条件”。
4. facilitation meaure: “便利性措施”。
5. an array of: “一系列的”；近义词还有a erie of ，a number of ，a et of等 。
6. integrated: “综合的，整合的”；这里指“综合性 的因素”。
7. ambitiou: “野/雄心勃勃的” ；此处也可以用enterpriing （有事业心的，有进取心的 ） 来代替 。
8. run : 通常同学们只用该词的常用意思 “跑 ” ，此处表示 “经营 ，运 营” ，近义词为operate ，manage等 。
9. timulate: “刺激 ，激励” ；此处可以用motivate ，inpire ，roue来替代 。
10. caue: 常用作动词，此处作名词，表示“事业 ，事情”，也可以简单地使thing来表示。
11. determination: “决心” ；通常考生会使用make up one’ mind来表示 “下定决心做某事”，但是determination 的使用更为正式 。
12. feaible: “可行的” ；此处也可以使用reaonable ，practicable ，workable ，achievable等。