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"Creating an appealing image ha become more important in contemporary ociety than i the reality or truth behind that image."
Ha creating an image become more important in our ociety than the reality or truth behind the image? I agree that image ha become a more central concern, at leat where hort-term buine or political ucce i at take (＝at rik). Neverthele, I think that in the longer term mage ultimately yield to ubtance and fact.
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精华：a central concern
be at take
yield to = give up the poition to...让位于，被……主宰
The important role of image i particularly evident in the buine world. Conider, for example, today' automobile indutry. American car are becoming eentially identical to competing Japanee car in nearly every mechanical and tructural repect, a well a in price. Thu to compete effectively auto companie mut now differentiate their product largelythrough image advertiing, by conjuring up(＝create) certain illuory benefit--uch a machimo, tatu, enibility, or fun. The increaing focu on image i alo evident in the book-publihing buine. Publiher are relying more and more on the power of their brand rather than the content of their book. Today ma-market book are upplanted within a year with product that are eential the ame---except with freh face, rifle, and other promotional angle. I find quite telling the fact that today more and more book publiher are being acquired by large media companie. And the increaing importance of image i epecially evident in the muic indutry, where originality, artitic interpretation, and technical proficiency have yielded almot entirely to ex appeal.[由好作文www.hAOzuowEn.com整理]