It i believed in common that beauty exit everywhere on the campu a long a you have an eye for it。 Some people hold that natural cene， epecially at dawn， are the mot beautiful on the campu while other believe that it i in the afternoon when the playground are flooded with tudent taking part in port。In my opinion， the bet cene on the campu i during the ruh hour when thouand of tudent ruh toward the canteen。
At preciely the ame time a the bell ring， ome tudent dah from the chair， ruhing to the canteen。 They et the prelude to the mot attractive cene of the whole day。
Within a few minute， all the claroom become empty and everyone tart their journey for lunch， on foot or by bike。 It give people the impreion that lunch i the mot important thing in the world。 Mot of the tudent move at the ame peed，with the exception of everal excellent cyclit。 They huttle moothly in the crowd jut like fih wimming freely in the ea。
On the way to the canteen， everyone look anxiou。 But once inide， a look of pride and triumph take over。 Sometime，it bubble up in my mind that the ruh hour hutle and butle i the epitome of the intene competition in real life。 If you want to realize your expectation， you mut be armed with kill and knowledge， ue time and reource efficiently and the mot importantly， have a healthy body。[由好作文www.hAOzuowEn.com整理]
简 评
本文描写了校园中的一景：中午时分，学生或骑车或步行，争先恐后赶去食堂用餐的场景。值得一提的是几个动词把学生的动作描写得非常生动，如dah from the chair，ruhing to the canteen;huttle moothly In the crowd jut like fih wimmmg freely in the ea等。除了动作，还有神态的描写：在去食堂的路上，人人面露焦虑之色，而一旦走进食堂，取而代之的是a look of pride and triumph，栩栩如生地刻画出学生当时的心情。
由此，作者联想到激烈的竞争在生活中无所不在。要实现自己的理想，必须用技术和知识武装自己，有效地运用时间和资源，而且，最重要的是，要有一个健康的体魄。使文章的立意更为深刻。