当你走出家门开始新的征程，首先要学会的就是要依靠自己，学会独立。没有人可以永远在别人的呵护下成长，独立生活是我们走向成熟的必经之路。
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There have been many great men in hitory. Many of them were very poor in childhood, and had no uncle, aunt or friend to help them. School were few and not very good. They could not depend on them for education. They aw how it wa, and et to work with their trength to know omething.① They worked their own way till they became well-known.② One of the mot famou teacher in England ued to tell hi pupil, I cannot make worthy men of you, but I can help you make men of yourelve.
Some young men dont try their bet to make themelve valuable to human being. They can not gain achievement unle they ee their weakne and change their coure. They are nothing now, and will be nothing a long a they live, unle they accept the advice of their parent and teacher, and depend on their own effort.
行文点评
我们应该依靠自己，他人只能帮助我们帮助自己。这是文章的主旨，也是第一段中的主要意思。第二段开始从正面举例说明历史上的伟大人物是怎样依靠自己的力量获得最后成功的。最后一段从反面举例，谈到现在有些年轻人不努力使自己成为对人类有益的人，并给出自己的建议，与题目和文章开头呼应。由好作网www.hAOzuowEn.com整理