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第1篇:高中英语作文--建议信

请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信,反映一下你校食堂的几点问题,以引起学校重视,并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括:

1. 菜价昂贵,菜市单一;2. 排队时间长,浪费午休时间;3. 味道不佳,浪费现象严重。

注意:1. 词数不少于120; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇: 食堂 canteen Dear Principal,

Recently, many tudent are dicuing the problem of the canteen. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I incerely hope you can adopt my uggetion. Thank you!

Your, Li Hua

作文范文: Dear Principal,

Some tudent think the price of the dihe are too high and that the choice are too limited. Another concern i that the time pent in waiting i o long that we have le time to have a ret. Meanwhile, ome tudent think that the tate of the food i awful, which lead to a lot of wate. the price be more reaonable and the choice of dihe be more variou.需注意的词汇、表达:

1. deliciou waiting tate(n.味道) taty (adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具)[由www.haoZuowen.Com整理]

price 价格

2. lower /bring down the price 降低价格 3. at a lower/reaonable price 以较低的价格 4. varietie of dihe 种类多样的菜品 5. For one thing,……. For another,……

6. make b (not)do th

7. wait /tand in line / in a queue for a long time 8. The kind of food are . 表达食堂出现的问题:

9. The price of dihe are o high that many of u can’t afford them.

10. There are o few dihe to chooe from, which i far from atifactory. / which can’t atify our

need.

11. It take u o much time to tand in line, which decreae our time of ret at noon. 12. The food in the canteen doen’t tate .

The tate of food in the canteen in’t

13. The food in the canteen tate o bad that a lot of food i left and wated 14. It’ a wate of time to tand in line for a long time.

15. The food in the canteen tate o bad, which lead to a evere phenomenon of wating food. 16. In the long run, it’ bad for our health and tudy.

17. It goe without aying that it will influence our leep in the afternoon. 表达提出的建议:

18. Improving the tate of the food i alo a good olution to the problem. 19. I think it’ neceary to provide more kind of food. 20. It’ high time that we took meaure to olve the problem.

So it’ high time for u to take meaure

21. To olve the problem, I think the canteen hould et up a new figure(形象) and improve the

preent condition to atify the tudent’ need.

22. We hope the canteen can provide u with dihe of a high quality at a reaonable price. 23. The canteen hould open more window o that we needn’t wait o long.

24. A far a I’m concerned, the canteen hould attach importance to the quality. What’ more,

different kind of food hould be provided.

25. Meaure are uppoed to be taken to improve the condition of the canteen.

建议模板: Dear ….,

I’m glad to receive your letter aking for my advice on how to…….(引出话题). Here are a few uggetion. Firt of all, it i important to do th. Then, it alo help to do th. Beide, it hould be a good idea to do th.

建议句型积累:

1. Many way can contribute to olving the problem, but I think the following may be the mot

effective one.

2. I’d like to make ome uggetion on ……. 3. It’ of great importance for b to do th.

It’ neceary for b to do th

4. It would be a good idea for b to do th. / It would be a better idea if……. 5. It contribute /help a lot if ……… 6. I ugget that …../ My uggetion i that …

It’ uggeted / advied / recommended that…… 7. You’d better do th./ We’d better do th

It’ better to do th

8. Meaure are uppoed to be taken to do th

We are uppoed to take effective meaure to do th 9. It’ high time that b th. / It’ high time for b to do th

第2篇:高中英语建议信作文

Dear Peter, Here are a few uggetion. Firt, it i important to take a Chinee coure, a you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow tudent. Then, it alo help to watch TV and read book, newpaper, and magazine in Chinee whenever poible. Beide, it hould be a good idea to learn and ing Chinee ong, becaue by doing o you'll learn and remember Chinee word more eaily. In addition, You can alo make more Chinee friend. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinee.

Try writing to me in Chinee next time.

写作注意问题

一是单词拼写要正确,大小写等。开头结尾部分的语法要正确。 ? 二是选择多种表达方式,例如给出的不同的提建议的句式。 ? 三是结构要清晰,三段式,有过渡词。

四是卷面要整洁。

五是字数要够,答题卡上划得横线部分尽量写满,最多剩一行

第3篇:高中英语作文 建议信(如何学英语)

假如你是李华,你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件,她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语。请你根据下列的内容给她写封回信。

1. 上课认真听讲,做好笔记,课后及时复习;

2. 词汇是基础,每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词,朗读课文;

3. 课外多与同学用英语交流,提高听力和口语能力;

4. 每天坚持写日记。

注意:1.词数120—150词左右,短文的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总数;

2.内容可适当发挥,注意行文连贯。

Dear Wang Mei,

I’m very glad to have received your e-mail.

Bet wihe!

Your,

Li Hua

Dear Wang Mei,

I’m very glad to have received your e-mail.Now I’m writing to give you ome advice on how to learn Englih well in high chool. Firt of all,you hould liten to the teacher carefully and take note in cla o that 众所周知),vocabulary i of great importance / eential.You hould pend half an hour in the morning reciting word and reading text aloud.What’ more,try to your clamate in Englih out of cla.In thi way you can improve your litening and poken Englih quickly.Lat but not leat,you hould keeping a diary,which help improve your written Englih and help you go over/review the word and expreion that you have learnt.

I hope thee uggetion will be of ue to you.Remember:where there i a will,there i a way. 有志者事竟成 /The man who ha made up hi mind to win will never ay “impoible”. 一个决心要成功的人是从来不会说“不可能的”。

Bet wihe!

Your, Li Hua

第4篇:高中英语建议信和倡议书作文精心整理

How to write a letter for advice

⑴ 说明建议的内容;

⑵ 提出具体建议的原因;

⑶ 指出采纳建议的益处。

注意事项:语言要委婉、礼貌,顾及对方感受。

Direction: For thi part, you are allowed thirty minute to write a letter. Suppoe you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a choolmate of your who i going to viit you during the ummer holiday for a week. You hould write at leat 100 word according to the uggetion given below in Chinee.

1、表示欢迎。 2、提出对度假安排的建议。 3、祝愿

Dear Xiao Wang,

coming to Beijing to join me in the ummer holiday. 第一段表示欢迎 If you can tay in Beijing only for a week, 表明建议的原因 语气亲切,符合说话人身份关系 for viiting a number of place of hitoric interet. 叙述词和副词一目了然 place that you have the greatet interet in, uch a

the Palace Mueum, the Summer Place, the Great then使文章结构紧凑

will make you have enough time to appreciate(欣赏) 使自己的安排具有说服力 what you really want to ee.

traveler, it i neceary for you to read ome 建议有理有据 book about thee place before you come to ee

them with your own eye. With more knowledge

about thee place, you will have a better

undertanding of Chinee hitory and culture.

I am eager to meet you oon in Beijing. 表达良好的祝愿,符合文体要求

假如你叫孙军,是恩施高中的学生,要给市长写一封信,反映学校门前交通拥挤现象,包括以下要点:

参考词汇: 穿行 thread one’ way 天桥 overpa

范文1

Dear Mayor,

I’m a tudent of No.1 Middle School. Here I have omething to tell you.

Next to a primary chool tand our chool, facing a main treet. When it come to traffic jam, it’ crammed with car during the ruh hour. What make thing wore i that children have to be picked up by their parent owing to their young age. A a conequence, ①it’ of great danger/②it’ extremely dangerou for the tudent to go through the traffic. According to the phenomenon tated above, it i high time that relevant authoritie took ome meaure like building an overpa.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Your,

Sun Jun

范文2

Dear Mayor,

I’m a tudent of No.1 Middle School. Here I have omething to tell you.

①Bordering a primary chool,/②Located next to a primary chool, my chool face the main road directly, which alway ha a traffic jam at the peak time of the whole day. ①Additionally/②In addition, many parent end their young children to chool and fetch them home,① thu making the traffic heavier./②thu cauing more eriou traffic jam./③thu reulting in more eriou traffic jam. There i no denying that we tudent, threading our way through mae of car, are expoed to great danger. ①Seeing thee matter, never will I top urging our government to take ome meaure. For the ake of improving the quality of traffic, it i ignificant to build an overpa./②In order to releae the tre of traffic problem, I h2ly ugget that relevant authoritie hould take active/effective meaure like building an overpa./③From my point of view,/A far a I’m concerned,/In my opinion, ome meaure are uppoed to be taken by government a oon a poible uch a building an overpa to improve the condition of the traffic./④Aimed at olving thee problem, the government hould take ome meaure immediately, uch a building an overpa ahead of our chool.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Your,

Sun Jun

例1广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观众的英语节目, 新聘任了来自英国的John作为节目编辑助理。现在, John就节目内容向广大中学生征求意见。假如你是学生李华, 建议开办“广州全接触” (All-round Guangzhou)节目。请根据以下节目设想给John写信:

Dear John,

I know you’re going to et up an Englih program for middle chool tudent. So I’m writing to ugget a program — “All-round Guangzhou”. Thi program will cover topic like the hitory, education, famou cenic pot, food and famou people of Guangzhou. It would be better to broadcat it on weekend o that we tudent can have the chance to watch it.

Beide, you can alo invite ome middle chool tudent to get involved in the program, which will urely aroue other tudent’ interet in it. Not only will thi program help tudent improve their Englih, but alo get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou o a to introduce Guangzhou to foreign viitor. I am ure it will be well-received by the middle chool tudent. I hope you can take my uggetion into conideration.

Sincerely your, Li Hua

例2 假设你是小明的好朋友李华,小明参加了一个英语演讲比赛,他对比赛非常担心,向你求助,请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。

[精华点评]

建议信的写作关键在于作者给出建议的语气委婉而中肯, 使对方容易接受。很多考生习惯使用祈使句或者You hould的句型表示建议, 这样比较生硬,因此考生转换不同的句型使语言丰富, 如范文中使用了you hould..., you had better..., remember to do等句型。在最后祝愿对方成功的时候, 可以用简明扼要的句型, 如wih you good luck / wih you ucce / may you ucceed, 使文章长短句结合得当。

Dear Xiaoming,

You have told me that you are very nervou about the coming peech contet and I will try to make ome uggetion which I hope can help you. In my opinion, you hould get well prepared before the peech contet by practicing before a mirror. Beide, you had better ue a brief and concie language in your peech o that you can leave a deep impreion on the judge. When you are giving the peech, remember to keep mile and even if you forget your word, don’t be panic and jut continue your peech, becaue no one will notice it. Wih you ucce in the peech! Your,

Li Hua

例3假如你是李华,你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件,她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语。请你根据下列的内容给她写封回信。

1. 上课认真听讲,做好笔记,课后及时复习;

2. 词汇是基础,每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词,朗读课文;

3. 课外多与同学用英语交流,提高听力和口语能力;

4. 每天坚持写日记。

注意:1.词数120—150词左右,短文的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总数;

2.内容可适当发挥,注意行文连贯。

Dear Wang Mei,

I’m very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I’m writing to give you ome advice on how to learn Englih well in high chool.

Firt of all, you hould liten to the teacher carefully and take note in cla o that you can go over your leon a oon a you can/regularly after cla. A i known to all=A we all know, vocabulary i of great importance / eential. You hould pend half an hour in the morning reciting word and reading text aloud. What’ more, try to communicate with your clamate in Englih out of cla. In thi way you can improve your litening and poken Englih quickly. Lat but not leat, you hould develop the habit of keeping a diary, which help improve your written Englih and help you go over/review the word and expreion that you have learnt.

I hope thee uggetion will be of ue to you. Remember: where there i a will, there i a way. /The man who ha made up hi mind to win will never ay “impoible”.

Bet wihe!

Your,

Li Hua

例4你是我们学校一名很热心的学生,得知我们校要建设娱乐休闲中心,正在征求同学们的意见,请你根据以下几个方面的提示给校长写一封120词左右的建议信。

1. 娱乐休闲中心应该包括乒乓球室和羽毛球室。

2. 最好在学生的课余时间开放。

3. 尽量不要收费。

4. ……

Dear Mr. Preident,

It’ come to my attention that our chool i going to build a new leiure center. I’m writing to ak you to conider the following uggetion.

Firtly, I’d like to ugget that there hould be a table-tenni room a well a a badminton court. I think it would do great good if you could build the center with an eye to thoe tudent who are intereted in playing table-tenni or badminton. Secondly, could the center open in our pare time? If o, we will have enough time to make full ue of it. Thirdly, we will be more than happy if the center i free. A we all know, not every tudent can afford the extra expene.

Thank you for reading my letter. I hope you will conider my uggetion. If the center i built, it will greatly enhance tudent life here on campu.

Your incerely,

Li Hua

倡议书

写倡议书时,尽量使用具有鼓动性和感召力的语言,如名人名言、格言、警句、以及对偶、排比等句式,以提高语言的表达效果。例如,在倡议书的结尾使用下列句子就可起到很好的效果。

“Believe yourelf and you can , manage it! Stick to it, and your dream will come true!” “Dear friend, come on! If you think you can, you can!”

“Pleae tart from now on! You never know what you can do until you try!”

Structure:

1. Introduction 发出倡议的根据、原因和目的。

tatement of the problem

how eriou i the problem

ummary of the propoed olution----in brief, what olution do you propoe?

2. Body 所倡议的具体内容和要求。

What do you want done?

How hould it be done?

What thing or people are needed?

When? How much will it cot?

3. Concluion 要表示倡议者的决心和希望

benefit—How will the propoal help the peron reading the letter

a call to action—what do you want the reader to do

范文欣赏

A chairman of the Environmental Protection Committee, I have no reaon different kind of pollution we human being one of the eriou problem. It human being, plant and animal. to olve the problem.

(Introduction of the topic and himelf/ threat / propoal)

Since we water, we hould finding thi problem. We may take a decade or more to improve the water quality, even though it may cot a lot of money to clean the polluted river.|| Secondly,

(meaure / difficultie ) ’ act now to make our world a better place.

(foreeeable reult/ a call)

例1由于废气、污水、白色垃圾等环境污染已危及到人类的健康与生存, 为鼓励大家节能环保,你们学校将举办一次“低碳行动”的环保活动, 假设你是高三(6)班的一名学生, 将要在这个活动中向全体师生发起“低碳生活”的倡议,以下是倡议的内容:

1. 尽量绿色出行:采取步行或自行车方式; 2. 少喝一次瓶装水;3. 尽量不用一次性制品, 如一次性木筷子和塑料袋;4. 每周至少手洗衣服一次; 5. 每周少开手机、电视一天。