二、 作文内容的陈述
结构in the firt place/ econdly/ on top of that
以下手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法，也是得高分的“亮点”。
1.改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。
〔原文〕We met at the chool gate and went there together early in the morning.
〔修正〕Early in the morning we met at the chool gate and went there together.
〔原文〕The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad new.
〔修正〕Hearing the bad new， the young man couldn’t help crying.
2.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。
①强调句
〔原文〕I met him in the treet yeterday.
〔修正〕It wa in the treet that I met him yeterday.
It wa yeterday that I met him in the treet.
②由with或without引导的短语。如:
He at in a chair with a newpaper in the hand.
③分词短语。如:
Satified with the reult，He decided to go on with a new experiment.
④倒装句。如:
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Never before have I een uch a wonderful film.
Not only hould we tudy in the college, but alo learn how to be a decent peron.
⑤省略句。如:
If o，victory will be our.
You can make ome change wherever neceary.
3.通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。
〔原文〕He topped u half an hour ago. He made u catch the next offender.
〔修正〕He topped u half an hour ago and made u catch the next offender.
〔原文〕We had a hort ret. Then we began to play happily. We ang and danced.
Some told torie. Some played che.
〔修正〕After a hort ret， we had great fun inging and dancing， telling joke and playing che.注意使用不同长度的句子，要结合使用，不能只用短句或只用长句。
4.学会使用过渡词。如:
①递进: then(然后)， beide(还有)， furthermore(而且)， moreover(此外)等。
②转折: however(然而)， but(但是)， on the contrary (相反)， after all(毕竟)等。
③总结: finally(最后)， at lat(最后)， in brief(总之)， in concluion(最后)等。
④强调: indeed(确实)， certainly(一定)， urely(确定)， above all(尤其)等。
⑤对比: in the ame way(同样地)， jut a(正如)， on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。
相似的比较： imilarly, in the ame manner 相反的比较： on the other hand, converely, wherea, while, intead, neverthele, in contrat, on the contrary, compared with …,
5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。如:
〔原文〕A new railway i being built in my hometown.
〔修正〕A new railway i under contruction in my hometown.
6.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:
〔原文〕I like reading while my brother like watching televiion.
〔修正〕I like reading while my brother enjoy watching televiion.
I like reading while watching televiion appeal to my brother.
三、 结尾
1、 All in all, what really matter i, in fact, that……（比如说到和谐社会 All in all, what really matter i, in fact, that we hould build our ociety a harmoniou ociety.）
2、 Therefore, it’ not difficult to draw a concluion that……
3、 A a reult , we hould take effective meaure to do th.（我们必须采取一些有效的措施来做些什么）
4、 From what ha been dicued above , we may conclude that ……
5、 Obviouly（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the concluion that good manner arie from politene and repect for other.
四、 一些用法
1、 陈述个人的观点
It i alleged that(据说)
In my view, both ide are partly right(两方面都部分的正确)
A far a I am concerned(就我而言)
A regard to me
My own point of view i that……
Peronally, I believe that……
My experience tell me that……
The invention of the handet, I dare to ay, turn out to be a tremendou hit.
The application of web ite, I dare to ay, turn out to be a greatly hit.
It come a no urprie that Chinee economy become increaingly hot.
2、 陈述别人的观点
Other individual, however, take the attitude that……
（错误的观点）b i under the fale belief that……
3、 图表作文
The table howindicate reveal that ……（表明、暗示、揭示）
According to the tatitic howing in that graph, we can ealiy eefound……（根据表中的数据，我们可以看见，发现）
A een from the chart/ A i portrayed in the picture
Sale went into a light decline=ale declined lightly(小幅下降)
Sale declined dramatically/harply/greatly/hugely (大幅下降)
A brief glimpe at our campu (the picture/cartoon/caricature) vividly how that mobile phone, becoming more and more prevalent.
五、好的替代
the machinethe device 代替 computer
handet代替 cell phone
*The Middle Kingdom代替 China
intenelycrucially important代替 very important (it i crucially important that the benefit of collective be on our priority.)
approache代替 way
current(currently) 代替 now
growing individual代替 more and more people
individual/ character/ folk 代替 people, peron
poitive, favorable, roy(美好的), promiing(有希望的), perfect, pleaurable, excellent, outtanding, 代替 good